This is a script wrote, that I want to shoot by the end of the month. What do you think?
Did the story keep you interested?
Husband comes back home from work, and runs into unexpected guests.
Suspense/ Comedy
Hanky-Panky
Please feel free to tear it apart!
I was trying to follow a Crackerfuck's suggestion on 3 act structure from my previous screenplay "Rends", so hopefully it worked out..
EDIT: Here is rev B
Did the story keep you interested?
Husband comes back home from work, and runs into unexpected guests.
Suspense/ Comedy
Hanky-Panky
Please feel free to tear it apart!
I was trying to follow a Crackerfuck's suggestion on 3 act structure from my previous screenplay "Rends", so hopefully it worked out..
EDIT: Here is rev B
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