Hey I'm back after almost a year! I haven't been busy at all just super lazy. Anyway I just finished a new script and here's the first draft: https://drive.google.com/file/d/0ByJPoBCImdApdWs3TnFaX0ZsQm8/view?usp=sharing
I think a did ok job but there are things I thought I could have done better. First I rushed it too much (I feel) and spend enough time establishing the characters or the world. Second I feel some of the action lines (you know what they're doing) could have been written better and maybe more visual. Third it wasn't funny enough for me. Comedy is hard and I think I this could have been better.
Anyway that's about it. Let me know what you thought about it.
Thanks.
I think a did ok job but there are things I thought I could have done better. First I rushed it too much (I feel) and spend enough time establishing the characters or the world. Second I feel some of the action lines (you know what they're doing) could have been written better and maybe more visual. Third it wasn't funny enough for me. Comedy is hard and I think I this could have been better.
Anyway that's about it. Let me know what you thought about it.
Thanks.