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archived-videos Fony Friends

Opening took a tad too long, in my opinion.

For what the film was intended for, it did well. The cuts were fine. I'm not sure if the length of the video was a requirement or not, but if it wasn't, you should probably consider cutting it down considerably. There was a whole lot of nothing.
 
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