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benj09

benj09

Hey guys, long time no speak. I recently shot and edited a Music EPK for a local artist Called Vanessa Murray, and I have to hand this piece of work in next week. I just wanted to get a few thoughts on it before I do, because you guys know your stuff so any comments and thoughts on how I could make it better would be great. Thank you.

https://vimeo.com/52866060

Here is the link.

Cheers
 
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Nice colouring. Love that forest.

There's a couple of spots where the girl's interview audio walks on top of itself. Also, the title cards for the FB & Contact links at the end in that bright blue & red look quite hideous compared to the rest of the lush footage. It's also a bit hard to read, and could benefit from different colours and possibly some drop-shadow or glow or something to set it out from the background.

Those were the only two things that really jumped out. Oh, and maybe indicate earlier (somehow) that it's not an actual music video 'cos I was quite surprised when that turned out to not be the case a whole minute in.

Very good, overall. :cool:
 
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