watch First short I produced.

[omarzamora]

I've written and directed several things on my own but this is the first short that my buddy wrote and directed and I wanted to get your guys' opinion on it. I think it makes sense on its own but it's actually a midquel to a feature we're working on. We made it a stand alone short because the tone didn't fit within the movie.

Enjoy & watch in HD please!

https://vimeo.com/73543010

 

[sfoster]

sorry i couldn't make it past 2 minutes and that was a struggle

 

[kazze]

It reminds me of something Adam Sandler would do or has already. The adult child thing which isn't my type of humor at all. I think it would be funny as a cooking show though.
I would suggest you use lav or some other mic outside of the camera because that would improve the sound. I use lav mic's...and it makes the universe of difference. Lighting was a little yellowy.

But I loved the camera shots.

 

[ChimpPhobiaFilms]

Really hit or miss short. For me it was a miss.

Not the type of humor that appeals to me or that I enjoy. But there's an audience for it.