archived-videos Film Experiment

[TomWilliams]

Hey, I am 16 years old and looking for a career in film and television production (as many of you are yourselves). I have just started getting serious about filmmaking and I am planning a short film with a bunch of my friends. I just wanted to share a short video I put together in a day. I would really appreciate your feedback and suggestions for any improvements. I trust you guys will come up with some really useful stuff since indietalk has such an awesome community! Enjoy!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wgTuPdyBhe0

 

[knightly]

That's a fun little procedure study... the "oops, I forgot the coffee/tea" thing happens to me all the time. I love it when little pieces like this actually connect with me and aren't just cliche little things.

 

[Zensteve]

Great little attention-to-detail exercise.

 

[directorik]

Nice.