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watch feedback to my trailer for short psychological thriller

hi guys.
this is the trailer (still not full CC and mixed).
i wanna test this trailer before i try to crowd fund for completing the short film.
the case is however, more complex since this is a weird story in itself, so i first hope the trailer make interest.
(this is a Foreign language though, Hebrew ;) )

the short film was suppose to be a feature, failed to be so, and finally was edited into the best workable option.
anyway, have a look at the trailer and let me know anything that pops into your mind.

https://vimeo.com/209966366
 
I really don't have any constructive criticism to add. Just that the trailer was great and made me very interested to see the film. Great editing and it looks like a very interesting story.
 
I really don't have any constructive criticism to add. Just that the trailer was great and made me very interested to see the film. Great editing and it looks like a very interesting story.

thanks for the fb.
i wanna know if there's any "extra" stuff
i should consider adding for a 1st time viewer (or English speaking) since i saw it too many times:

for example-
should i add any other titles ? at start, or end?
i thought of adding some "story telling" titles but felt it wasn't needed.
 

indietalk

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Relax with the bumping, you just posted this morning and have mentioned this in your welcome post as well.
 
I'm interested!

I'd only add that there were a couple of times with the CC where I would have left the text up just a tick longer.

r.
 

indietalk

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Yeah a couple times (2-3) they appeared for a microsecond. I guess that can happen with fast editing the answer could be to join sentences.

Looks good!
 
Thanks guys.

if anyone feels like it,
i would be very interested to know what can be understood from the bits of story presented
in the trailer.
 
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