FEEDBACK REQUEST - "Stumptown" Mystery/Thriller

[jeemseems]

Looking for some good feedback for this feature-length script. It's a second draft. 57 pages.

LOGLINE: A bored, young reporter at a trashy alt-weekly gets in over her head as she investigates the mysterious disappearances of homeless kids living on the streets of downtown Portland, OR.

I'm interested in hearing any and all opinions. Thanks in advance!

 

[indietalk]

Makes me think of cold brew.

 

[chromekid]

i could take a look at some pages, prob not all 57, but can give you a general idea of what i think by inciting incident

 

[rljon]

Do you have a link? I'll read it and give you feedback it he next few days if you'll do the same for my 66 pg pilot.