Hi everyone,
I'm totally new here, so sorry if I'm breaking some sort of rule by posting this particular topic. I couldn't find any rule against it...
Anyway, I'm just looking for feedback on a screenplay idea. Has it been done before, do you find it interesting, etc.
Clutter - indie dramedy
Jennifer, a girl in her late twenties, is forced to clean out her stuff from the garage to make way for her mother to turn it into an art studio. The garage is jam-packed with boxes and boxes of things from her entire life, and her mother is threatening to throw away whatever Jennifer doesn't take.
As she goes through it all, she rediscovers the old loves and painful memories of her past, which upsets her once placid relationships with her mother and her boyfriend. I'm thinking that there will be flashbacks every time she comes across something significant, Slumdog Millionaire style.
I see a couple plot lines resulting from this:
Firstly, she finds a book that her high school sweetheart had lent her, and when she meets up with him for the first time in years to give it back, they realize that they're still in love with each other, and she has to figure out whether she wants to leave her boyfriend for him.
Secondly, she's long felt that she peaked at eleven years old when a painting of hers won first place in a nation-wide contest. Shortly after that, in junior high school, an art teacher had taken advantage of her and molested her, which led to troubled high school years and giving up painting. She tells her mother about the molestation for the first time, and is furious with her for having let it happen.
Of course, it's about confronting your past in order to move forward with the present.
Thanks!
I'm totally new here, so sorry if I'm breaking some sort of rule by posting this particular topic. I couldn't find any rule against it...
Anyway, I'm just looking for feedback on a screenplay idea. Has it been done before, do you find it interesting, etc.
Clutter - indie dramedy
Jennifer, a girl in her late twenties, is forced to clean out her stuff from the garage to make way for her mother to turn it into an art studio. The garage is jam-packed with boxes and boxes of things from her entire life, and her mother is threatening to throw away whatever Jennifer doesn't take.
As she goes through it all, she rediscovers the old loves and painful memories of her past, which upsets her once placid relationships with her mother and her boyfriend. I'm thinking that there will be flashbacks every time she comes across something significant, Slumdog Millionaire style.
I see a couple plot lines resulting from this:
Firstly, she finds a book that her high school sweetheart had lent her, and when she meets up with him for the first time in years to give it back, they realize that they're still in love with each other, and she has to figure out whether she wants to leave her boyfriend for him.
Secondly, she's long felt that she peaked at eleven years old when a painting of hers won first place in a nation-wide contest. Shortly after that, in junior high school, an art teacher had taken advantage of her and molested her, which led to troubled high school years and giving up painting. She tells her mother about the molestation for the first time, and is furious with her for having let it happen.
Of course, it's about confronting your past in order to move forward with the present.
Thanks!