Fuck me. It seems that every other time I write out a long and thoughtful response to a thread, the site eats my post.
I hate that !!
You obviously took some time to think about the story and to reply to this post, so thank you twice for having to type it up a second time.
Regarding youtube.. I have a little add-on i installed on firefox, and it puts a download button underneath any youtube video. I constantly have buffering problems with that website and it frustrates me, so I just download everything now and then watch it locally. especially if i plan on seeing it more than once. strangely this is always a lot faster than trying to stream it and watch it in the browser.
I will cut down the party sequence, but wow @ 5-7 seconds. that's practically just my establishing shot right now haha. i really like when hot girl slaps MC in the pool and then laughs, they look really cute together. I also really like the shot where the asian girl in the blue dress shows up, her face starts off overexposed and then she leans into shade toward my dog to reveal herself. i thought that was a really cool way of introducing someone ( she was supposed to be alt girl.. but had a death in the family and was replaced in the final day) and it should look even better/more apparent after the color grading.
That's a great spin on the beer gag, I like it a lot!
Much of what you said would require reshooting, but regardless this is all a learning experience for me anyway, cutting my teeth before I tackle one of my really clever ideas. And it's interesting reading and considering this alternate approach, there are a couple of ideas I would like to use but I don't know if it'll be possible or not. I'll see what I can do.
In my ending current ending they don't hook up, they just go smoke weed together. I could try to emphasize that more. What I was going for was in the way that james gives hot girl drugs because he likes her, alt girl is doing the same for MC. dual friend zone thing going on.
The group of girls are chatting..
Hey now I was in that group too
and I didn't even have any makeup on
Oh just for kicks...
Full conversation with anna ( alt girl ) near the beginning
http://youtu.be/icLtzs0w_AQ
And full confrontation with billy after he gets out of the pool
http://youtu.be/Aoby5fp0ZfA