Starting this year, i decided to write a feature script every three months. Making four a year. Even if one of them sucks to the max, I get alot of experience which is very needed.
Ive got a month left on this one. And ive hated my self the whole time writing this. Its just not what ive wanted and its ,just blah.
I wanted it to be a very dark comedy. But i believe i failed.
Could any of you take a look and destroy it for me? Give me some suggestions story,character,dialogue wise.
The first fourteen pages are missing. I wrote them on paper then continued on computer. Been meaning to type them up. Sorry for that.
Now this is the first draft so probably some spelling errors and it isnt tight with descriptions. I add more in on my second draft.
Tell me whatever youd like. Need to get better. And somehow salvage this.
Thanks in advance for the comments.
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=Z4LHM9WV
https://docs.google.com/viewer?a=v&...NTg3MS00MDc5LThmMzAtMzQ0ZDM0OGEwZDcz&hl=en_US
Ive got a month left on this one. And ive hated my self the whole time writing this. Its just not what ive wanted and its ,just blah.
I wanted it to be a very dark comedy. But i believe i failed.
Could any of you take a look and destroy it for me? Give me some suggestions story,character,dialogue wise.
The first fourteen pages are missing. I wrote them on paper then continued on computer. Been meaning to type them up. Sorry for that.
Now this is the first draft so probably some spelling errors and it isnt tight with descriptions. I add more in on my second draft.
Tell me whatever youd like. Need to get better. And somehow salvage this.
Thanks in advance for the comments.
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=Z4LHM9WV
https://docs.google.com/viewer?a=v&...NTg3MS00MDc5LThmMzAtMzQ0ZDM0OGEwZDcz&hl=en_US
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