watch Doritos Commercial - Looking for Criticism

[JacketFilm12]

Me and a few friends at school entered this year's "Crash The Superbowl" contest. I'm just looking for some criticism on the commercial. I think we have a solid chance at being a finalist this year, but I'm clearly biased.

Let me know what you think:

http://www.crashthesuperbowl.com/#/gallery?video=14064

 

[indietalk]

It's a good entry. I didn't "lol" but it was clever and well done.

 

[laurenvictoria]

Really good!