Hey, I have a short 5 page script that I would like some constructive critizism on...if someone would like to read it, please post your e-mail address. This is my first screenplay. Thank you very much.
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Desperate need of crit
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nicholas
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I liked it for a first script. It certainly wasn't full of action, but it felt dark and i felt isolated in the mind and thoughts of this guy. Even though he was talking to himself the whole time, it still was an interesting script, and sends a good message about pills, drugs, etc.
I liked it.
keep it up.
I liked it.
keep it up.
Feel free to send it my way.
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Thank you for your crit Nicholas! Thanks for taking the time to read it for me!
