Nice work. I can see you completely poured yourself into this project. You cut this together really well; I like your editing.
I hate to say it, but you're not done. There is one more thing that, in my opinion, you simply MUST do.
In the first 2/3 or the movie, I can't see anyone's face! This is very bad. I understand you were shooting with natural lighting (I've done it, too). In these conditions, throw cinematography out the window (you already have). When it comes to choosing your f-stop, ISO, etc., nevermind trying to make the surroundings look natural -- we need to see your actors' face!
In this film, you've got bedrooms that look nice, kitchens that look nice, but your actors are barely a silhouette (especially the black dude).
This is strong work. And if you really want to show it off, you simply must fix this problem. Get your hands on Colorista (if you don't already have it), and go to town. Do whatever you have to do to allow your audience to connect with your characters.
We don't watch movies for scenery. We don't watch movies for situations. We watch movies for people. We need to be able to connect with the people in your film, and if we can't see their faces (and read their eyes), we can't do that.
