I like the look of it, especially the speeded up movement bit in the cafe.
I'm in a similar situation to you, i'm a young indie producer (17), my film's just nearing the end of production. I wish you luck with your project, if you get the chance take a look at our facebook page, http://www.facebook.com/home.php?ref=home#/group.php?gid=60593367453&ref=ts
It's good to se another young indie producer on the forum.
Smith.
I'm in a similar situation to you, i'm a young indie producer (17), my film's just nearing the end of production. I wish you luck with your project, if you get the chance take a look at our facebook page, http://www.facebook.com/home.php?ref=home#/group.php?gid=60593367453&ref=ts
It's good to se another young indie producer on the forum.
Smith.