The font you used immediately turned me off. It might be ok if it were a horror/thriller showreel.
as far as your work, the production quality seemed all over the place. Some of the clips will hurt your chances for getting hired, while a lot of the other ones look amazing and should get you hired no problem.
One example of something you definitely need to take out is the outdoor stuff around 34 seconds because it's blurry.
The music video stuff at 12-19 seconds, and everything from 41 seconds and on is beautiful. Do more like that!