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archived-videos Check out the trailer for this new comedy film "Unemployable"

Trailer by itself doesn't say anything, really.

The YouTube "more info" text-area told me more about the film than the trailer did, tbh.

Consider including relevant scenes from the description, maybe? That made sense, at least.

What's the going rate for an MPAA trailer review, btw? ;)

Maybe the film is funny... maybe it's not. There's just no way to tell from your trailer. It needs work.
 
Heh, I had a good :lol: at the new trailer rating.

Much better than the first, yah. Everything made perfect sense for the first 60 seconds (though a bit slow. Maybe 'cos it's a stoner/chill/slacker kind of flick). Last 40 secs seemed a bit more disjointed.

Good luck with it. :)
 
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