I'm looking for someone that can read what i have written down currently and telling me if it is any good and if it is worth pursuing.
Can someone read my ideas?
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Can you explain a little more? Are you talking about concepts? Actual screenplays? Short stories?
concepts the concepts are apart of one giant story but it is very early stages
Sure... I can take a gander.
how would you like me to send it?
Might be best to just post it here on your thread... Or a link to it. That way others can get IN on the ACTION.
i will post it here but be warned i am very much a noobie to this stuff so it is more like jotted down points and crude
No worries... We're just talking concepts so I'm not expecting to read anything other than that.
there are definitely misspellings in there lol
1) Well this isn't much of a concept to me... It's more character creation. I have no idea what the GREAT WAR was. Neither do I understand what HIS KIND is. That he lives off a single POWER CRYSTAL tells me this is probably science fiction/fantasy but not much more than that. As a character? I've definitely seen worse but as a possible story? Not enough here to make me sit up and take notice... So far.
2) Pretty much the same comments as #1.
3) Giving me a TERMINATOR vibe... How will this be different?
4) From TERMINATOR vibe to BLADE RUNNER vibe.
5) Now you're talking about MAGIC and from what little I can tell... Mixing in MAGIC with inventions and machines that have taken over a city?
So... I think you have the beginning of a concept but you definitely have more character than concept overall. Not much more but more. Am I also to understand you may be attempting to turn this into a series of some kind?
If it were me? I'd take what you already have... Kick it up so you have a clear beginning, middle, and end and consider turning this into a book FIRST even if you were to self-publish on Amazon. I say that because even IF you were to write this as a complete SEASON of a potential series, it would be difficult to get anyone on board because this is obviously going to be a special effects laden story.
Nail IT in a book and you have PROOF OF CONCEPT.
Just my two cents.
Not a bad beginning...