archived-videos Can I please have 5 minutes of your time?

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CourtneyLauren90

Hello everyone I am just another aspiring filmmaker trying to get some constructive criticism! I've made a previous post with the same link before, it did not get as much feedback as I would have liked..so here is the video again guys!

http://youtu.be/sxGWr_YXJYs

Enjoy and thank you for watching!!!

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A nice first effort. I, personally, did not like your color palate
choices - it was distracting. But I loved the use of black and
white.

It could really use some tightening up.

Your description on YouTube doesn’t match what I saw. No
way could I understand that there was an assassin making
a drastic choice just by watching your movie - that aspect
needs to be explained and even then it’s quite a stretch.
 
Already watch, I only see the weakness is from the Talent, need more practice in act,,,

I will wait for another film from you,, :D
 
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