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archived-videos Call of Babylon (Feature Film) - Teaser Trailer

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Graeme Noble

Hi. This is a short teaser trailer for a feature length film that I'm currently filming. Any feedback is greatly appreciated.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GqsjKSy2CB8
 
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Solid trailer, intense ending! I feel like it's just random shots of peoples faces until the very end: even a trailer needs to tell a story, maybe try and at least have the people's voices in the next one, showing that they are happy? Finally, I thought that the music was too intense at the start. While the trailer ad these problems it still served its purpose. I know what the movie is about and it was intense enough at the end that im interested in seeing it, so great work!
 
OurLife said:
Solid trailer, intense ending! I feel like it's just random shots of peoples faces until the very end: even a trailer needs to tell a story, maybe try and at least have the people's voices in the next one, showing that they are happy? Finally, I thought that the music was too intense at the start. While the trailer ad these problems it still served its purpose. I know what the movie is about and it was intense enough at the end that im interested in seeing it, so great work!
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Spot on!
The music was way too intense for the "good" portion of the trailer. The moment the first big "noise/snare/clap" I was expecting a surprise scene, but instead the girl just walked outside with an umbrella -- not the type of "surprise" I was looking for.

Also there was no story to the trailer and the Christian part of the family didn't come thru. Seems like a cool flick but the trailer needs work.

Have you thought about redoing it?

Joey
 
This is just a teaser to tease people into wanting to see the film. I will be editing a completely fresh TRAILER upon completion of the film where the story will be explained in more detail. Thanks for the comment.
 
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