archived-videos Cafe Je Vous Aime - Your WORST date EVER!

Excellent visual composition and pace. Very good. Pulled me in as a viewer right from the opening shot.
Dialogue was off. Don't say it if you can show it. Too many words. In a few places, actors looked like they were waiting for their cue, to speak their lines and not in an actual conversation. Forced. Strong editing. A few more CUs. Let the cast speak more with their body language.

Very well done over all. Very well done!
 
haha thanks Don for watching and your feedback. In all honesty, yes the lines were too lengthy at times. But luckily as an actor, i could still find the motivation behind the wordiness and hence able to digest and remember. Thanks again and do subscribe! :)
 
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