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archived-videos Bitter Love - 5minute SHORT Film

Thanks for the comment. I didn't write the script but co-directed and edited the film.

Could you explain the comment a bit more for me please? :) Thanks.
 
You filmed one girl telling the other girl a story. It would have been better if you could have found a way to film the story itself.
 
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