archived-videos Bitter Love - 5minute SHORT Film

[Graeme Noble]

This is a hard hitting drama with some action thrown in. Comments are very much appreciated, thanks!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KPk1x0WnwAE

 

[Murdock]

It was all exposition. We had no clue about any of the story until you told us. It looked nice.

 

[Graeme Noble]

Thanks for the comment. I didn't write the script but co-directed and edited the film.

Could you explain the comment a bit more for me please? Thanks.

 

[Murdock]

You filmed one girl telling the other girl a story. It would have been better if you could have found a way to film the story itself.

 

[Graeme Noble]

Okay, thanks for clearing that up!