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Okay I posted up my "opus" which at 25 odd minutes long and in 3 parts is probably difficult to watch.

Here's something a little easier and shorter to watch. This is a film my team and I made for a 48 hour film competition. The brief was;

Prop: "Todays newspaper"
Dialogue: "why would we go backwards"
Theme: "A dog"

This is what we ended up with. The music was also composed and recorded in the 48 hour period.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=V6QTl7Q95sI

As always feedback is encouraged. Good, bad and ugly!
 
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I liked that a lot. :)

Can't really think of anything constructive to add. There's a lot of great films coming out of these 48-hour things now.
 
I'm going to be a little more crucial then Zen, it's the only way you can learn and grow.

-Some of the shot composition under the bridge at the begining was off, the framing was off.
-The logistics behind one of the bums catching the other bum stealing was odd.
-The transition after him catching him stealing felt wierd and unfinished.
-Him killing the bum by kicking him in the shoulder was odd.

I thought it was a nice little story, but just needs to be cleaner and tighter.

Thanks for sharing :)
 
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