Hello everyone,
I mostly lurk in this forum, but I think you guys are awesome and offer great advice.
I just finished my first draft for a short film (about 18 pages) and wanted someone with fresh eyes to critique the story. More so than that, tell me your honest opinion of the story. Is it good? Does it fall flat? Any areas that need more work/ development? Anything helps.
If you would like to help me out, send me a PM and I'll send a PDF of the script to your e-mail.
Thanks.
I mostly lurk in this forum, but I think you guys are awesome and offer great advice.
I just finished my first draft for a short film (about 18 pages) and wanted someone with fresh eyes to critique the story. More so than that, tell me your honest opinion of the story. Is it good? Does it fall flat? Any areas that need more work/ development? Anything helps.
If you would like to help me out, send me a PM and I'll send a PDF of the script to your e-mail.
Thanks.