Welcome to indietalk!
I have a few observations: On the “About us” page you simply have
the exact same paragraph as you have on your home page. You offer
no information about you.
Same with the “Services” page. Nothing new there - only what is on
your home page.
Your “Testimonials” page give a little of your background. I was
thinking that there would be some recommendations from past
clients and something that shows evidence of your experience.
Frankly, everyone with just a bit of knowledge and understanding
of the business knows that having screenplays “under
consideration” is meaningless. And telling a potential used of
your service that you are currently shopping your latest
screenplay around is superfluous.
And why do you have a clip from a TV show on you “Contact us”
page? What does that have to do with your services.
All this and using a free web service shows, to me, a lack of
professionalism. It would be nice to know who you are and what
your qualifications are on the “About us” page.
So why you? And who are you? Your name isn’t even on your web site.
