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a writing exercise

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I want to practice my writing skills and English. Can somebody give me a genre and/or a subject 48 hour film style? I'll write a five pager based on that and post the final product here for Critique and for anyone to shoot (if it won't be too embarrassing).
 
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I didn't like the way you introduced some of the characters and settings, but damn, that's one awesome screenplay. I'm busy right now, but I might contact you in the future about your screenplay.
Fight Club+ Kids=

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O_yqv4IbqVo
 
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A story revolving around a telephone call that changes 4 people lives. There must be a scene of someone walking through an airport to a plane that will take them away from their problems...

Not told in chronological order.
 
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arrodiii said:
Something like this?
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Yeah, sort of.

ChimpPhobiaFilms said:
A story revolving around a telephone call that changes 4 people lives. There must be a scene of someone walking through an airport to a plane that will take them away from their problems...

Not told in chronological order.
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This one's hard. So far I'm thinking that someone calls in to confess an old murder robbery naming 4 of his accomplices before appearing to commit suicide. It ends with a twist that the body found doesn't belong to anyone the accomplices can recognize. The caller has left the country with the loot.
 
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