watch A Surreal Movie project i made for school

[Azezzara]

Hello! im new to this fourum and i'm looking for a little feedback on a Indie film i made for school
It would be awesome if you watched it and told me what you think about it!
I can take criticisim very good so don't be afraid to offend me.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qmkm77bo90Y&feature=plcp

Thank you

 

[SiCurious]

It was okay, I can see what you were going for. Parts were enjoyable and thought provoking. Some nice Bunuel / Dali moments. Good.

Better lighting would have helped, it all appeared a bit flat. I'd also say the sound could have been improved, I'm guessing you recorded it all on camera. You need to get a mic on the end of a boom and record that dialogue up close. Also, minor point, I don't speak Swedish... maybe subtitles for us international types?

I found the music to be pretty trippy (in a good way) and in keeping with the rest of the content. My only criticism in that respect would be to cut it out sooner, it distracted slightly from the dialogue.

Not a bad effort. Welcome to the forum