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Hello! im new to this fourum and i'm looking for a little feedback on a Indie film i made for school
It would be awesome if you watched it and told me what you think about it!
I can take criticisim very good so don't be afraid to offend me. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qmkm77bo90Y&feature=plcp
It was okay, I can see what you were going for. Parts were enjoyable and thought provoking. Some nice Bunuel / Dali moments. Good.
Better lighting would have helped, it all appeared a bit flat. I'd also say the sound could have been improved, I'm guessing you recorded it all on camera. You need to get a mic on the end of a boom and record that dialogue up close. Also, minor point, I don't speak Swedish... maybe subtitles for us international types?
I found the music to be pretty trippy (in a good way) and in keeping with the rest of the content. My only criticism in that respect would be to cut it out sooner, it distracted slightly from the dialogue.
