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archived-videos A Pale Pudding

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I can't suspend disbelief when young people play old people.

The story line was a bit sketchy to me, or I didn't catch something. IDK.
 
I can't suspend disbelief when young people play old people.

The story line was a bit sketchy to me, or I didn't catch something. IDK.

I get these two a lot! Definitely need to improve how I lay out a plot.

Thank you for taking the time to watch the film.
 
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