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archived-videos A CowBoy In The Flesh - Short Film

Would have been better if yoiu would have expounded? on the "now and again" part. You know, at dinner with the girlfriend's parents, at church, while at the police station. Something like that. there's no tention with him seeing a cowboy while he's by himself. Good idea though.
 
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