Hah, that's awesome guys. Nice use of editing to add even extra punch to some brutal choreography. Punch, cut to the guy flipping in the air, sick. I also really liked how it the sun sets, it starts to look really cool with the sunset in the background. Nice use of scale, you weren't afraid of to put mega longshots in there. I like that the scene traveled, that the characters were moving as they were fighting.
Things that could make it better: There were some dead moments with the flow of the scene. Nothing that can't be fixed with a little editing. For instance, there is a shot of the two guys standing in pose for a second before going on with the action that should be cut a little later... looks like the moment before you yelled action if you know what i mean. Actually, that whole running down the hill part was a little awkward. Last time you see the protagonist, he is lying face down at the bottom of the hill. The enemy gets up and runs down the hill and the next shot you see is two guys running down the hill, except one of them is the protagonist. Nothing too big, this is shit you could always fix up into editing if you wanted to.
I guess the point I'm trying to make is this: you can clearly execute punches with impact. With your next project, improve the flow of the fight. Give me a story within the fight. There should highs and lows. Make the enemies seem unrelenting/ cut the scene so that the enemies aren't giving the protagonist time to recover. Put your protagonist in a tight spot before he comes back for the climactic finish. Make him really fight for it. Make this thing cinematic. I think this is the direction to go to improve on already solid ability and you are halfway there.. I liked this fight a lot better than your previous work you posted on here good job.
I'm thinking about it... and screw story. Something like this that makes no excuses about its lack of story is better than something that has a shoddy story. You cut to the chase. The fighting is entertaining. I'm thinking, if you had a really well paced and well choreographed fight scene to show for yourself, you could land a job choreographing fight scenes for real. Story, in this case, would only get in the way in showcasing what you really passionate about.
And the ending made me laugh.
loved the sound effects too.
