Hey guys, looking for some feedback on my short. It's a 5 page emotional drama piece with the slightest touch of the surreal.
LOGLINE: A grieving couple coming to terms with the mysterious disappearance of their son discover they are already expecting again. They must endeavour to move forward for the sake of their new arrival.
If anyone has any suggestions for improvement for the screenplay or the logline, it is much appreciated. The short contains little dialogue with the idea being the visuals are reinforced with strong audio content. Anyway, let me know what you think.
LOGLINE: A grieving couple coming to terms with the mysterious disappearance of their son discover they are already expecting again. They must endeavour to move forward for the sake of their new arrival.
If anyone has any suggestions for improvement for the screenplay or the logline, it is much appreciated. The short contains little dialogue with the idea being the visuals are reinforced with strong audio content. Anyway, let me know what you think.
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