5 page script for funding

[supercarz]

Hi Guys

I'm putting together a funding package for my country's film commision to get funding for this short, as they've just developed a new funding slot for first time filmmakers.

The basic premise of it is 'A man attempting to escape his 'coma state' mind before the doctors turn his life machine off.'

Its still in draft stage and was wandering if anyone would be keen to read it to let me know the parts that need improving/changing etc.

If so just flick me your email and i'll send the script.

Thanks

Matt

 

[Ccolebrook]

You can send it to me.
Ccolebrooked@gmail.com

 

[Aegis]

Damn! That's a GREAT idea! Makes for a terrific logline too!

Now I gotta get it out of my head 'cause I've got my own scripts to work on

Good luck with it!

 

[supercarz]

Hi Ccolebrook

Sorry for the late reply, I have sent the script to you now

THanks for taking the time to read it

Cheers
Matt

 

[Ernest Worthing]

Have you seen Awake?

You're idea seems quite different but you might want to watch it to avoid any similarities and then having ppl always relate it to that.