ok this is like a action war movie and this is what I got so far.........
Peter mclain(a 70 year old world war 2 veteran losing his fight with cancer) is laying down on a hospital bed in a small white room. The only sound heard is the sound of the recperator beside his bed. A nurse walks into the room:
"Hi Mr.Mclain, how are you doing today?"
Starts checking the bag of morphine and other equipment.
Peter Mclain tries to speak in between moans"Al.........right"
The nurse looks into Peters then leaves the room.
Close up of peters face then it starts to fade to white then when it's all white it starts to fade back to peters face on the battle field of Germany.
BOOM! a gernade explodes 15 feet in front of the hole peter is shooting out of with his t action rifle, he shoots his rifle and his one of the german troops in the chest.
"MOVE UP!" hollars the troops leutenant, Trent
Some troops throw grenades and then 15 troops(including Peter) jump out of holes and start running for the next hole 20' away. 1 soldier gets shot and falls to the ground the rest of the troops are running and shooting. The rest make it to the hole. Peter starts talking to his fellow soldier
Peter: "Tell you what Damien, if we make it out of here i'll give you a quart of rum"
Damien: "You got yourself a deal" Then he looks over top of the mound of mud and uses his browning automatic rifle(BAR) machine gun and takes out 4 german solidiers then ducks back down into the hole. Peter then looks out of the hole with his thompson and shoots at german soldiers, mud flying in front of him because of enemy fire, he duck back in the hole then reloads while looking up every couple seconds. Then they hear a small thud right behind them, a grenade. They quickly scream "GRENADE!" and take a large jump. Everyone survives. He then hears Leutenant Trent Shout "The Germans are retreating!" Everyone in the trenches/holes Shout with joy then they hear small whistle that keeps getting louder and louder then BOOM! The Germans are using artillary.......Leutenant Trent Shouts "RETREAT!" Then more and more artillary shells hit the battle field. Peter is still now running as fast as he possibly could along with his fellow platoon. The rest of the Platoon is ahead of Peter and they are almost out of the range for the artillary shells. The Platoon Is far away from the range of the artillary shells so they jump in a hole and Leutenant Trent Shouts"RUN YOUR F***ING @$$ OFF SOLDIER!" and just as Peter is 30' from the hole a shell explodes very close to him and knocks him down(The perspective changes now to it happening through Peters eyes) He looks to his right then his left(stuned). Then he starts being dragged back towards the hold then he is laying down in the hole with the Leutenant Trent looking over him saying " C'mon soldier, stay with me" Peter starts blinking/fainting and then his eyes shut.
END OF Scene #1
Peter wakes up in a hospital and starts looking around the room then the door opens and his wife says" Are you alright? The nurse told me you just had internal bleeding! What happened!?" Peter: " It's ok honey i'm fine" Wife: "Your in a hospital you're not fine!"
Peter holds his wifes hands. "It's ok" His wife hugs him with his face over her shoulder, then it has a close up of his face then starts fading to white when it's all white it starts fading back to his When he has cancer(hugging his wife in the hospital room) Peter: "It's O.k" Then it backs way from his face so the camera can see his 30 year old son and 33 year old daughter and his 2 grand children (one boy and one girl the age of 5).
Peter mclain(a 70 year old world war 2 veteran losing his fight with cancer) is laying down on a hospital bed in a small white room. The only sound heard is the sound of the recperator beside his bed. A nurse walks into the room:
"Hi Mr.Mclain, how are you doing today?"
Starts checking the bag of morphine and other equipment.
Peter Mclain tries to speak in between moans"Al.........right"
The nurse looks into Peters then leaves the room.
Close up of peters face then it starts to fade to white then when it's all white it starts to fade back to peters face on the battle field of Germany.
BOOM! a gernade explodes 15 feet in front of the hole peter is shooting out of with his t action rifle, he shoots his rifle and his one of the german troops in the chest.
"MOVE UP!" hollars the troops leutenant, Trent
Some troops throw grenades and then 15 troops(including Peter) jump out of holes and start running for the next hole 20' away. 1 soldier gets shot and falls to the ground the rest of the troops are running and shooting. The rest make it to the hole. Peter starts talking to his fellow soldier
Peter: "Tell you what Damien, if we make it out of here i'll give you a quart of rum"
Damien: "You got yourself a deal" Then he looks over top of the mound of mud and uses his browning automatic rifle(BAR) machine gun and takes out 4 german solidiers then ducks back down into the hole. Peter then looks out of the hole with his thompson and shoots at german soldiers, mud flying in front of him because of enemy fire, he duck back in the hole then reloads while looking up every couple seconds. Then they hear a small thud right behind them, a grenade. They quickly scream "GRENADE!" and take a large jump. Everyone survives. He then hears Leutenant Trent Shout "The Germans are retreating!" Everyone in the trenches/holes Shout with joy then they hear small whistle that keeps getting louder and louder then BOOM! The Germans are using artillary.......Leutenant Trent Shouts "RETREAT!" Then more and more artillary shells hit the battle field. Peter is still now running as fast as he possibly could along with his fellow platoon. The rest of the Platoon is ahead of Peter and they are almost out of the range for the artillary shells. The Platoon Is far away from the range of the artillary shells so they jump in a hole and Leutenant Trent Shouts"RUN YOUR F***ING @$$ OFF SOLDIER!" and just as Peter is 30' from the hole a shell explodes very close to him and knocks him down(The perspective changes now to it happening through Peters eyes) He looks to his right then his left(stuned). Then he starts being dragged back towards the hold then he is laying down in the hole with the Leutenant Trent looking over him saying " C'mon soldier, stay with me" Peter starts blinking/fainting and then his eyes shut.
END OF Scene #1
Peter wakes up in a hospital and starts looking around the room then the door opens and his wife says" Are you alright? The nurse told me you just had internal bleeding! What happened!?" Peter: " It's ok honey i'm fine" Wife: "Your in a hospital you're not fine!"
Peter holds his wifes hands. "It's ok" His wife hugs him with his face over her shoulder, then it has a close up of his face then starts fading to white when it's all white it starts fading back to his When he has cancer(hugging his wife in the hospital room) Peter: "It's O.k" Then it backs way from his face so the camera can see his 30 year old son and 33 year old daughter and his 2 grand children (one boy and one girl the age of 5).
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oh and anyone who reads this, the script is copyrighted by the goverment of canada!!! anyway, thanks for reading and commenting Chris i'll fix it up a bit and add some more to the post from my script. I think i might change him to a world war 2 veteran instead, that way i have a larger range of gns to exloit and a larger (filming) terrain.
