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archived-videos 2 short films

1st film

Take out that spinning thing at 2:11. Everyting was good to that point. Then, bam!!, here's this big piece of bad. Again at 2:53. You're doing good then BAM. There's this flash back and forth thing.

2nd film

Funny as hell. Keep it up.:)
 
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