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1st Draft: America Love Story

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（电影剧本）《美国爱情故事》
（Screenplay）《America love story》

作者 徐均赛
Author Junsai Xu

前言
Preface

非常有把握地说，当代，至少到目前为止，《美国爱情故事》实属世界上最伟大的描写爱情的杰作。
I persuade you of its truth in confident of success very much，In the contemporary era，Up to now at least，《America love story》really belongs to the greatest masterpiece that has been portrayed love in the world.

言及此地，异议丛生，肯定要问，为什么会自我作秀，出语惊人，甚至狂妄，来进行这样的界定呢？
Saying something here'to，Objections are overgrowing，Somebody surely want to ask，Why do you put on a show self，To speak astonishingly，Even wildly arrogant，Conducted such a define？

那么，就应该直截了当地指出，之所以要把《美国爱情故事》归类为无以伦比的绚丽灿烂的美好崇高的作品，是因为绝对地具有着历史的社会的内在的科学根据。也即如果在总体上进行举例，归纳，推理，其基础则鉴于下面条分缕析地提供出来的事实存在客观情况研究成果。
Then，I should straightforwardly indicate at once，The reason that demands 《America love story》 be classified into a beyond compare，a gorgeous glorious，a fragrant sublime production，Be due absolutely to possess historical，social，internal science basis. Namely on the whole, if I conducted illustration，induction，ratiocination，Its base in consideration of the following provided for factual existence，objective condition，research result in analyzing point by point.

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众所周知，美国是世界文化汇聚冶炼的大熔炉。四百多年来，成千上万的移民始终不断地涌现，定居，生存。因为这样，在各个国家之间，在各个民族之间，在各个人种之间，由此及彼，互相通婚，组建家庭，混血交配，生衍繁殖，从而形成了质量非常优越的人力资源长河，深入地变化为促进全面繁荣最根本的能量，或者至少也应该列入为最主要的原因之一。
As is known to all，America is the great furnace in the world culture convergence refinement. More than four hundred years，Thousands and thousands of immigrants always have constantly been sprung up，settled down，subsisted. Because of this，Among different countries，Among different nationalities，Among different races，Proceed from the one to the other，Intermarriage each other，Forming families，Miscegenation copulation，Fertility reproduction，Consequently emerged the human resources long river that the quality is highly superior，Deep becoming the most fundamental energy that promoted a comprehensive prosperity，Perhaps should also be included one of the main reasons at least.

可见，移民婚姻，在规模上，在程度上，在归类上，美国应该毫无疑问地在各个国家当中，是最有特色的，是独占鳌头的，是蔚为奇观的。并且，作为基本的国策，已经成大势所趋，过去绝对是如此，现在依然还这样，将来也不会变化。从而在漫长的时光隧道中，不断沉淀，创造出了属于整个人类的极其宝贵的共同享有的财富。
Be seen，Migratory marriage，In scale，In degree，In classification，Among different countries，America should certainly be the most characteristic，Coming out on top, Affording a wonder. Moreover，As a basically national policy，It has become the general trend，The past was absolutely in this way，Being like that as before now，And also will not change in the future. Thereby in a endless time tunnel，Continuously precipitated，Having created a belonging to the entire human race，a extremely valuable，an all sharing enjoyment in the wealth.

问题在于，虽然早已经记录下了有关这方面的林林总总信息，但在文学中，但在美学中，但在影学中，曾几何时有过描写，有过强调，有过研究？这也就非常明确地告诉我们，探索重要题材的行为的本身，毋容置疑地也就决定了是在，开掘着事物所包含的伟大性。所以时至今日，《美国爱情故事》的崭新建构终于填补了长久遗留下来的空白，使之绝对能够不同凡响地跻身于科学发展史上巍峨高耸的殿堂。
The problem lie in，Although it had already recorded the numerously relevant information for this aspect，In literature，In aesthetics，In filmology，Once upon a time had it been described? Had it been emphasized? Had it been researched？This also clearly tell us very much，The act itself that we explored some important themes，And also decided to be undoubtedly digging the greatness of object included. Therefore at the present day，The completely new construction of 《America love story》has eventually filled in the gaps left over for a long time，Being absolutely so outstanding that it could ascend among the towering soaring palaces in the scientifically developmental history .
 
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故事的发生地是在宾州。虽然，人物所用的名字是不得不编造出来。但是，基本上在生活中都是有原型依据的，构思的情节链也有不少确实存在过，而校名地名店名等则全部实在凿凿。因此，具有非常显著的地方特色，散发出来浓郁的生活气息，围绕着凸显故事的确切性，要叫读者不得不信以为真。
The story occurred in Pennsylvania. Although the name used by characters can't be avoided concocting，There basically are all in accordance with the prototype in life，There are a lot of conceived plot chains existed indeed，As well as the school name，the place name，the shop name，et cetera are really entire authenticity then. Therefore，Possessing a strongly distinguished Local specialtiy，Diffusing a rich vitality，Highlighting its exact nature around the story，To make the readers having no choice but to take the story for gospel truth.

我们大都知道，宾州确实是一个极其了不起的地方，是独立战争时期的鏖兵主战场之一，是美利坚合众国建国的十三州之一，是世界上第一部成文宪法的诞生地，工业教育文化非常发达的自治政区，被高度称誉为里程碑州和拱顶石州。所以毫无疑问，宾州的环境面貌是可以代表美国的环境面貌的，而美国的环境面貌则可以代表世界的环境面貌。
We almost all know, Pennsylvania really is a extremely extraordinary place, Being one of the main battlefields that fiercely fought during the revolutionary war, Being one of the thirteen states when the United States of America was established, Being the birthplace of the first written constitution in the world, Being the commonwealth in industry, in education, in culture, developed very much, Being highly admired for the milestone state and the keystone state. So beyond question, The environmental aspect in Pennsylvania can represent the environmental aspect in America, Moreover, the environmental aspect in America can represent the environmental aspect in the world.

由此可见，因为勾勒描写叙述的地方就是宾州，所以故事尽享天时地利人和之总共，也是理所当然的近水楼台先得月了。
Thus it can be seen, Because the place that was exactly sketched, described, narrated is Pennsylvania, As a result, The story indulged itself in the aggregate of the favourable climate, of the topographical advantages, of the people harmony, Also a water-front pavilion naturally gets the moonlight first.
 
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本人意在揭示出极具透视爱情面面观的清晰性。即既然被称作为是美国爱情故事的版本，那么很显然也就不可能流落于简简单单，而需要很高的驾驭技巧才能去进行布局。所以，《美国爱情故事》实实在在具有着诠释关于恋爱的婚姻的家庭的百科全书那般的功能。
I am intended to reveal the explicitness of extremely observing the aspects of love myself. Namely now that it has been called as America love story version, Then it is obvious that also become just simple next to impossible, Moreover, It needs a master skill to go to conduct the layout. Therefore, 《America love story》truly possesses of the encyclopaedic function that interprets love, marriage, family.

首先，在剧本的结构上，分为上下两部分，经纬穿插交错着。当然肯定是要以时间的先后过渡的顺序来编成纵线，同时也必须颇具匠心地把平铺直叙推向至奇峰突起，要经营出“意料之外情理之中”的欧•亨利式结尾。
First of all, On the screenplay structure, Being divided into the upperpart and the underpart, Longitude and latitude interspersed with and interlaced with. Of course, I certainly wanted to weave a vertical line in time transition sequence, Meanwhile, I must also push the simply narrative to the magnificently peak in an ingenuity, In order to create the conclusion of “Contrary to expectation and within the bounds of reason” by O•Henry.

其次，精心建构，单方面爱，赤诚相爱，精神恋爱，三条横线，并且让它们自始至终地合成交道，形成了矛盾的摩擦的冲突的情节。以显示出整个过程充满了错综复杂的问题。
Secondly, Elaborately constructed, Unilateral love, Falling in love with absolute sincerity, Platonic love, Three horizontal lines, And let them compound, come into contact with from beginning to end, Shaped the contradictory, fricative, conflictive plot. In order to reveal the intricate problems that were filled in the whole process.

再则，作品还交代了必须讲述清楚的背景资料，如处理同居关系，如处理离异关系，如处理子女关系，这些本来是直接的实在的遗留的与爱情紧密相关的纽带，换句话来说完全都还是因为爱情而派生出来的事物情由。因此，在内容上就显得很厚实，很深刻，很经典。
Furthermore, The work also explained the background materials that I must narrate clearly, For example, Dealing with a cohabitation relationship; For example, Dealing with a divorce relationship; For example, Dealing with a child relationship; These originally are the direct, true, legacy links with closely relevant love, In other words, Entirely because of the hows and whys that derived itself from the love. Therefore, It appeared to be very thick, very profound, very classic on the concerned contents.
 
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作品是通过了几个各有不同的主要时间阶段，来反映唐大之和乔安娜结合十年的系列渐变。那是始终犯错，那是始终抗争，那是始终相爱，以至凤凰涅槃，最后浴火重生。是在普通的日常的平凡的现实生活场景中，精确地记录着情感作用转移出来的酸甜苦辣咸的种种滋味。
The work passed through the main time periods of several diversity, Reflecting Dazhi Tang has been married to Joanna for ten years in a series of gradual diversification. That was always making a mistake, That was always resisting, That was always falling in love, So that it became phoenix nirvana, Being alien resurrection in the end. Being in the real life scenes that was ordinary, routine, commonplace, Precisely hasing recorded the various relish of acidity, sweety, bitterness, sting, salt that the emotional effect transferred out.

然而，这幅由人世沧桑幻化组成的风俗画，只是撷取了历史长河中的一朵浪花，只是捕捉了时代趋势中的一个片断，只是浓缩了社会世道中的一点精华，从而展现了移民婚姻心酸的沉重的艰难的历程。绝对不属于什么轻松的活儿，始终就是一杯非常苦涩的酒，因为须面对很难自拔的泥淖。情况往往如此糟糕：要么往事不堪回首，要么现实不如人意。
However, This genre painting was composed of human affairs mutability, Merely picked one spray in the history long river, Merely caught one fragment in the epoch tendency, Merely condensed one essence in the society world, Consequently revealed the sad, heavy, difficult course of the immigrant marriage. Absolutely didn't belong to what easy job, Always exactly was a cup of bitter, Because you must face the morass that it is difficult to extricate yourself. The situation frequently was so much worse: Either old memories were too bitter to recall, or realities were far from satisfactory.

粗粗看来，似乎有着一种莫名其状的力量在掌控着，叫人像车轮似地旋转着来面对生活磨难。不过如果要从本质上面去进行分析的话，是在客观地冷静地精细地观察着现实生活，又按照生活本来的样子而科学地进行描写。因此情形也就明了，是回归了现实主义，是坚持了现实主义，是运用了现实主义，是现实主义文学创作方法的又一次伟大的胜利。
Cursorily glanced, Seemingly who took control by an incomprehensibly shaped power, Made everyone looking like a wheel that was similarly whirling to stand up to the life ordeal. However if it was to carry out an analysis from the top of nature, It was objectively, calmly, meticulously observing the real life, And conducted scientificlly describing according to livelihood in the original appearance again. Therefore the situation also was transparent, Being returned realism, Being upheld realism, Being applied realism, Was a great victory in America realism literature creation method once again.
 
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我曾经很仔细地研究了古希腊古罗马以来的各种文学历史，发现不是几乎，而为全部所有，也即只要是文学名著都该无一例外地列入进了悲剧的范畴。因此，在当代世界文学评论上率先地提出了前沿尖端的科学论断，发表了特大型的论文《爱情悲剧是文学创作的永恒主题》。
I had very carefully been researched various literary history since ancient Greece and ancient Rome once, Discovering not almost, And on the whole, Namely so long as they were literature masterpieces that must be included into the tragedy category without exception. Therefore, I first proposed the most forward, sophisticated, scientific judgement on world literature review in contemporary era, Publishing the oversize thesis 《The love tragedy is the eternal subject of literature creation 》.

但是，最新研究表明，在现代社会前，在当前情况中，在普遍兴旺后，造成爱情悲剧，诸如过去所有，政治经济战争，最主要的因素，已不复存在了。也就是说，为了海伦，使特洛伊，国破家亡，此等例证，永远消失。
However, The latest research indicated, Modern society ago, In the current situation, Widespread prosperity after, Bringing about the love tragedy, Such as the former occurrence, Politics, Economy, War, The most important factor, Already no longer exist. In other words, In order to seize Helen, Causing Troy, Country destruction and home extinction, These examples, Disappeared forever.

那么，在当代世界的每处地方中，到底还有没有爱情悲剧呢？应该说如排除了疾病以外，其他成因都已无足轻重了。也就是说，疾病属于性学，医疗学，生命科学，等等范畴；而与文学，美学，艺术，等等领域，并不相关。
Then, Is everywhere there any love tragedy still around the world in contemporary era？It should be said that if we remove the serious illness, Other causes already are entirely insignificant. In other words, Disease belongs to sexology, medical science, bioscience, and so on category；But being not relevant with literature, aesthetics, art, and so on domain.

尤其，像美国这样的方方面面都高度发达的国家，虽然形成人生悲剧的因素是依旧存在着，但是酿造爱情悲剧的实质已经荡然无存。因为，人生悲剧与爱情悲剧是压根儿有区别的：追根究底，人生悲剧，原因出处，来自主观；爱情悲剧，如何衍生，客观险恶，所谓世道。所以，我们需要奉献出《美国爱情故事》，来正式地宣布爱情悲剧时代的终结，爱情正剧和爱情喜剧的纪元的开始。从而把对爱情美学的剖析鉴赏研究提升到一个崭新的高度。
Especially, Such an excessively developed country as America on all aspects, Although there still are the elements that form the life tragedy, The essence of the love tragedy ferment has already been vanished. Because they are totally different between the life tragedy and the love tragedy: Get to the root of the matter, The life tragedy, The source of a quotation or allusion, Come from subjectivity；The love tragedy, How it is derived, Objectiveness is sinister, So-called troubled world. As a result, We required dedicating 《America love story》，In order that we formally announced the finality of The love tragedy age, And the epoch of the love drama and the romantic comedy has been begun. Thus promoting a completely new height that analyze, appreciate, research the love aesthetics.
 
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主要人物
Main characters

1.唐大之（黄人）：学贯中西，实事求是，极其健美。在中国是报社记者。来美后成为发牌员。非常注重生命质量的问题。出场时45岁。
2.乔安娜（白人）：金发，蓝眼，玉肤。曲线奔腾，魔鬼身材，沉鱼落雁。坚持维护爱情的纯洁性高尚性美好性。出场时19岁。
3.凯瑟琳（白人）：长相上就像是乔安娜的大姐。性格如同清清的涓涓的暖暖的水。全身心挚爱着自己的子孙。出场时39岁。
4.玛格丽特（白人）：很靓丽，但偏瘦，嗜好多。她视表妹乔安娜为情敌，从来没有消停伺机报复。出场时23岁。
5.克里斯多夫（白人）：原是银行职员，服刑期满出狱，迎合玛格丽特，成为主谋帮凶。出场时38岁。
6.唐洋洋（黄人）：唐大之与前妻花蓓蕾的儿子。出场时11岁。
7.艾米（混血儿）：唐大之和乔安娜的女儿。出场时刚诞生。
8.花蓓蕾（黄人）：唐大之的前妻。出场时37岁。
9.李水儿（黄人）：唐大之的前女友。出场时30岁。
10.沃顿（黑人）：唐大之的朋友。出场时26岁。
11.雪莉（黑人）：唐大之的朋友。出场时21岁。
12.怀特菲尔德（黑人）：唐大之的朋友。出场时50岁。
1.Dazhi Tang （Yellow）：Hasing a thorough knowledge of both western and Chinese, Seeking truth from facts, Extremely strong and handsome. He was a journalist in newspaper office in China. Becoming a dealer after immigrating into the United States. Highly emphasizing the problem of life quality. When he appeared at the age of forty-five.
2.Joanna （White）：Blonde. Curves gallop, Devil figure, The most beautiful who would make wild geese alight and fish dive down for gaze. Insisted on preserving the love in purity, nobility, nicety. When she appeared at the age of nineteen.
3.Catherine （White）：Being just like Joanna's eldest sister on appearances. Her personality is similar to a limpid, trickly, warm water. Ardently loving her descendant with all her heart. When she appeared at the age of thirty-nine.
4.Margaret （White）：Very beautiful, But being too thin, Much bad habits. She regarded younger female cousin Joanna as the rival in love. She never stopped waiting for an opportunity to revenge. When she appeared at the age of twenty-three.
5.Christopher （White）：Originally being a bank clerk, Released from prison served his sentence after, Ingratiated himself with Margaret, Became a mastermind and an accomplice. When he appeared at the age of thirty-eight.
6.Yangyang Tang （Yellow）：The son of Dazhi Tang and his ex-wife Beilei Hua. When he appeared at the age of eleven.
7.Amy （Half-breed）：The daughter of Dazhi Tang and Joanna. When she appeared to be a neonate.
8.Beilei Hua （Yellow）：Dazhi Tang's ex-wife. When she appeared at the age of thirty-seven.
9.Shuier Li （Yellow）：Dazhi Tang's ex-girlfriend. When she appeared at the age of thirty.
10.Wharton （black）：Dazhi Tang's friend. When he appeared at the age of twenty-six.
11.Shirley （black）：Dazhi Tang's friend. When she appeared at the age of twenty-one.
12.Whitefield （black）：Dazhi Tang's friend. When he appeared at the age of fifty.
 
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剧情梗概
Synopsis

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唐大之在长跑锻炼的时候，认识了玛格丽特及其表妹乔安娜。因经常与乔安娜比试身手，于是慢慢地就成为了朋友。后来，觉察到玛格丽特抽烟厉害，还带动了乔安娜跟着模仿，也就萌生出了想断交的念头。
When Dazhi Tang was doing his long distance running exercise, Recognizing Margaret and her younger female cousin Joanna. Because he frequently had the agility competition with Joanna, Thereupon became friends little by little. Afterwards, He scented that Margaret smoked too much herself and also drove Joanna imitation along with her, Also conceived the idea of wanting to break off friendship.

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而玛格丽特和乔安娜暗地里都对唐大之心存好感。所以，受到明显的冷落后，玛格丽特抽烟少了，乔安娜则干脆戒掉，于是大家恢复来往。最终，唐大之与乔安娜由倾慕到携手再相拥。直把玛格丽特气得是七窍生烟，痛楚彻骨，深怀恨意。
But both Margaret and Joanna became aware of good impression on Dazhi Tang secretively. Therefore, Obviously suffering a leaving them out in the cold, Margaret smoked less, Then Joanna straightwardly quitted smoking, Hence Dazhi Tang resumed his association with Margaret and Joanna. In the end, Dazhi Tang had a strong admiration for Joanna, Went hand in hand by both of them, Gave Joanna a big hug. Directly making Margaret fulmination, anguish, furiousness.
 
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（Screenplay）《America love story》

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乔安娜先到上海，与唐大之的前女友李水儿打交道，从而大为领教了中国的婚姻文化，服饰文化，风俗文化等。以后，还特地前去多伦多，见了唐大之的前妻花蓓蕾及儿子唐洋洋。表现出了直面另类生活，在某种程度上，所具有的茫然性，矛盾性，包容性。
Joanna first arrived in Shanghai, Came into contact with Shuier Li of Dazhi Tang's ex-girlfriend, Thus greatly experienced marriage culture, apparel culture, custom culture, and so on in China. Afterward, Joanna specially went to Toronto, Visiting Beilei Hua of Dazhi Tang's ex-wife and the son of Dazhi Tang and his ex-wife Beilei Hua, Yangyang Tang. Expressing facing alternative livelihood, In a certain degree, Possessing perplexity, contradiction, tolerance.

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婚后的时光亦如流水。唐大之就要求乔安娜到图书馆去阅读。哪里晓得，到了后来，乔安娜变成了酒吧的座上客。唐大之力劝不听，就只好采取手段，叫乔安娜吃不消，最终罢休作了断。
The time looked also like a running water after marriage. Dazhi Tang requested that Joanna go to library for reading thereupon. Where does know, To the later, Joanna became an honoured guest in the bar. Dazhi Tang urged upon Joanna no drinking, Joanna didn't listen. Dazhi Tang Only has to take measures, Forcing Joanna to be unable to stand. She gave up drinking to finish that at last.

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乔安娜到超市当上了收银员。生活刚刚恢复了平静，又有罪恶的魔爪伸出，布下为时几年的灾祸。在这期间，乔安娜先后一次堕胎，三次住医院进行戒毒。唐大之始终积极进取。并且，在沃顿、雪莉、怀特菲尔德等朋友的帮助下，竭尽全力来挽救败局。
Joanna became a cashier in supermarket. When the life had only just been restored calm, The evil claws unsheathed again, Castting a disaster that lasted a few years. During this period, Joanna conducted an induced abortion, the detoxification of three times living in the hospital successively. Dazhi Tang vigorously kept forging ahead from beginning to end. As well as, Under the help of Wharton, Shirley, Whitefield, and so on friends, Going to great lengths to rescue a fiasco.

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煎熬苦难总算有了终结。健康的可爱的宝贝的女儿艾米诞生。外婆凯瑟琳奉献全身心呵护外孙女。这深深地感染着唐大之，再加上零距离朝夕相处，双方克制不住吐露心迹，引发出了惊涛骇浪巨涌。
There was the termination of suffering hardship finally. The healthy, lovely, darling daughter Amy was born. Grandmother Catherine took great care of granddaughter Amy in dedicating herself wholeheartedly. This fact had been affecting Dazhi Tang deeply, Superadding the being together morning and night in a zero distance, Both sides could hardly restrain themselves from revealing the true state of their mind, Triggering off great waves, wild river, surging sea.

七
7

唐大之凯瑟琳认为，此次风波仅限于解释问题。但出自本能，乔安娜却始终耿耿于怀，不肯放过。为了进行报复，竟然走进赌场，输得一塌糊涂，造成很大损失。最终，致使整个家庭生活，陷入了十分困顿当中。
Dazhi Tang and Catherine insistently considered this disturbance as being restricted within the explanation of their problem. But from an instinctive reaction, Joanna had always held the grudges yet and refused to forgive. In order to revenge herself on them for this matter, Unexpectedly walked into a casino, Lost in a complete mess, Caused a lot of damage. In the end, Joanna brought about trouble on the whole family life by falling into complete difficulties.

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8

为了清偿大笔赌债，乔安娜再次进饭店，重操旧业当女招待，但收入不高还款慢，受到债主多次催逼。在万般无奈没辙中，竟然有意识地无意识地参与阴谋作恶勾当。为此，家庭已经出现非常明显的解体危机趋势。
In order to pay off a large gambling debts, Joanna went to restaurant once again and returned to her former career as a waitress. But her income wasn't high, And she repaid slow. Joanna suffered pressing repeatedly from the creditor. In having no alternative or in hopelessness, Unexpectedly Joanna deliberately and unconsciously participated in conspiracy, evil, criminality. For this reason, The family had already appeared the disassembly critical tendency significantly.

九
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乔安娜是不断犯错，当然有其主观原因。但在这桩桩件件事情发生的黑幕背后，进行作梗使坏加害的始终是玛格丽特。玛格丽特奉行“得不到就毁灭”的恶搞原则，长期图谋捣烂唐大之和乔安娜的姻缘。帮凶则是心狠手辣恶毒的克里斯多夫。
Joanna was continually making mistakes, Certainly hasing her subjective reason. But these things occurred behind the black curtain, It was Margaret that had conducted the obstruction, the mischief, the injury throughout. Margaret pursued the retaliation principle that if it is unavailable and it is just destructive. She contrived to pound the happy fate which brought Dazhi Tang and Joanna together for a long time. And the accomplice exactly was heartless, cruel, malicious Christopher.

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一方面进行了深入的反思，一方面了解到实际的情况。唐大之怒火中烧，奋起反抗没商量，利用狼狈太贪婪，设计谋引蛇出洞，实实在在地报了一箭之仇。
On the one hand, Dazhi Tang proceeded the deep reflection; On the other hand, Realized the actual situation. He simmered with rage, Rose up in resistance without negotiations, Utilized a wolf and a jackal being too greedy for gain, Designed drawing a snake out of its hole, Paid off an old grudge really and truly.
 
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（Screenplay）《America love story》

片头
Credit titles

合亭堂堂外观，石刻中英文字，周围环境楚楚。
推出片名：《美国爱情故事》
歌曲《白兰鸽》音乐声响起。
蓝天，白云；山丘，河流；厂房，烟囱；铁道，高速；树木，花丛；路况，街区；种种镜头掠过。
同时，推出演职员的名单。
高空鸟瞰整个区域，绿林大道向前延伸，画面出现字幕表明：2006年春季，伯利恒市，宾夕法尼亚州。
在绿林大道上，长跑的，滑板的，散步的，骑车的，运球的，玩耍的，实在是热热闹闹。
同时，推出演职员的名单。
路边草坪，有一女子，身段婀娜，欢腾跳跃，丢出飞盘，狗儿窜起，张口接住，再递过去，往返循环，乐此不彼。
歌曲《白兰鸽》音乐声止息。
Harmony pavilion by all appearances was dignified or impressive. Both Chinese and English were in the stone inscription. The surrounding environment was delicate and attractive.
Launching the film title：《America love story》
The musical sound in the song 《Una Paloma Blanca》began to ring.
Blue sky, White cloud; Massif, Rivers; Workshop, Chimney; Railway, Highway; Trees, Flowers; Road, Block; A variety of camera lens swept past.
At the same time, Launching the list of the actors, the actresses, the staffs.
Having a bird's eye view of the whole area from high altitude, The greenwood avenue extended forward. The appeared subtitles indicated on the picture: In the spring of 2006, Bethlehem, Pennsylvania.
On the greenwood avenue, Some people were in a long running, Some people were in a sliding plate, Some people were in a going for walk, Some people were in a riding bike, Some people were in a whirling dribble, Some people were in a being playing, being a scene of boisterousness indeed.
At the same time, Launching the list of the actors, the actresses, the staffs.
On a grassy lawn in the roadside, There was a beautiful girl, Hasing a graceful carriage, Greatly rejoicing over jumping, Throwing a frisbee, The dog was leaping, Catching the frisbee by its opening mouth, Delivering through again, Going there and back cyclically, Being eager to do that.
The musical sound in the song 《Una Paloma Blanca》 ceased.
 
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（Screenplay）《America love story》

上部
Upperpart

第一幕
Chapter One

1，绿林大道，日，外
唐大之轻松地跨着大步，在向前挺进。
玛格丽特看见，动肘，示意乔安娜。
玛格丽特轻声：“中国人快到了。”
乔安娜在热身：“今天呢，你看好，我非要超他八百米不可，然后肯定率先冲刺终点。”
唐大之到达，相互打招呼，邀约一起练。
乔安娜和玛格丽特并肩，率先起步，很快出发。
唐大之在她们的身后，跟了好几百米。
玛格丽特跑不动了，边停下，边喘息，边挑逗。
玛格丽特：“乔安娜是长跑健将，你能够追得上她吗？”
唐大之：“我试试看喽。”
玛格丽特：“恐怕不行哎。”
唐大之：“是吗？本来，女士就优先；所以，现在，我甘拜下风。”
与玛格丽特击掌后，唐大之追赶了上去。
乔安娜很努力，摆动非常厉害，柳枝弯弯飘逸。
唐大之领略着线条轻盈腾跃，柔美的韵味不断地散发出来。
1, Greenwood avenue, Day, Outside
Dazhi Tang was easily striding, pushing forward.
Margaret caught sight of Dazhi Tang, Moving her elbow, Hinting Joanna.
Margaret in a soft voice：“Chinese is coming soon.”
Joanna was warming up：“Today, You look about, I am bound to exceed him in eight hundred meters, Then being the first to sprint to the finish surely .”
Dazhi Tang has arrived, Said hello each other, Invited them to an exercise together.
Joanna and Margaret were shoulder to shoulder, Taking the lead in starting, Setting forth quickly.
Dazhi Tang was behind them, Following hundreds of meters.
Margaret was unable to continue running, Simultaneously stopping, Simultaneously breathing, Simultaneously teasing.
Margaret：“Joanna is the top-notch player in a long distance run, Can you catch up with her?”
Dazhi Tang：“let me have a try for it.”
Margaret：“I am afraid that you can't do.”
Dazhi Tang：“Oh, really? Originally, Lady should be given priority；Therefore, Just now, I candidly admit defeat.”
Dazhi Tang high-fived with Margaret, And catching up with Joanna.
Joanna extremely strove, swung strongly and intensely, Willow branch was elegantly winding.
Dazhi Tang was appreciating the lithesome and curvaceous line, The feminine charm continuously diffused.
 
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（Screenplay）《America love story》

第二幕
Chapter Two

4，绿林大道，日，外
就在这瞬间内，唐大之露出峥嵘，猛地提高了马力。
恰似流星追月那般，腾腾腾赶将了上去。
乔安娜没有察觉到，待发现后已经迟迟。
在忐忑不安当中，乔安娜试图拦住唐大之。
乔安娜：“哎，男子汉，你该不该让一让本姑娘呢？”
唐大之不断地闪着身子，躲过了乔安娜多次阻挡。
唐大之：“哎，大小姐，你懂不懂赛场上有欺诈呢？”
乔安娜：“唐大之，坏东东；装样子，来骗人；搞偷袭，不算数！”
唐大之：“乔安娜，不要急；在前面，我等你；慢慢来，会赢的！”
唐大之敬礼，加快了步伐，身手很矫健。
乔安娜要强，绝不肯示弱，曲线跳跃着。
唐大之再加速度，顺利地过了马路。
乔安娜慢了节拍，被红灯叫停下来。
4, Greenwood avenue, Day, Outside
Exactly within an instant, Dazhi Tang showed his extraordinariness, Suddenly increasing his horsepower significantly.
Just like shooting star to pursue the moon, Rapidly catching up with her.
Joanna hasn't perceived the changing situation, Already Being late after finding.
In fear and tremble, Joanna attempted to hinder Dazhi Tang.
Joanna：“Hey! Man, Do you know whether you will concede to this girl a little or not？”
Dazhi Tang constantly eluded, Escaping the prevention several times by Joanna.
Dazhi Tang：“Hey! A big young lady, Do you understand there to be some cheat on an arena？”
Joanna：“Dazhi Tang，Bad guy; Camouflaging, Deceiving; Making a sneak attack, Becoming invalid!”
Dazhi Tang：“Joanna，Don't worry, In front, I wait for you; Take it easy, You would win!”
Dazhi Tang saluted with a smile, And strongly accelerated his pace, Hasing a vigorous style.
Joanna desired to be powerful, Absolutely refused to show her weakness, Her curves was leaping intensely.
Dazhi Tang coupled with his speed, Smoothly passing through the road.
Joanna slowed up her beats, Being Halted by traffic light.
 
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（Screenplay）《America love story》

第三幕
Chapter Three

7，合亭，日，外
此时，出售冷品的车子驶近，正响着音乐，在招揽生意。
不少人行动起来，去了车子停下来的横穿马路上。
唐大之打招呼：“请等一会儿，我去买雪糕。”
玛格丽特摆手：“我们又不是少年儿童……”
唐大之谐戏道：“绝对没有错！但是我相信，当你激赏时，一定会比少年儿童还要少年儿童呢。”
乔安娜站起来，轻轻地推着唐大之。
乔安娜：“是的，没错，很对，我想吃啊。”
就这样，唐大之很快地拿回来了六个蛋筒冰淇淋。
给了乔安娜三个。玛格丽特是两个。
然后，想了想，就给自己留下来一个。
7, Harmony pavilion, Day, Outside
This moment, The vehicle of selling frozen foods was approaching, The music is ringing, Soliciting trade.
A lot of people were going into action, Going to the transverse road where the vehicle stopped.
Dazhi Tang greeted them：“Please wait a moment，I am going to buy ice cream.”
Margaret waved aside his suggestion：“We're not young children ……”
Dazhi Tang jokingly said：“There absolutely is nothing wrong, However I believe, When you enjoy greatly, You are bound to appreciate for more than young children.”
Joanna stood up, Being lightly pushing Dazhi Tang.
Joanna：“Yeah, That is right, Correct, I want to eat.”
In this way, Dazhi Tang swiftly took back six ice cream cone.
He gave Joanna three pieces, And Margaret got two pieces.
Then, Thought for a second, He only left himself in one piece.
 
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（Screenplay）《America love story》

第四幕
Chapter Four

10，合亭，日，外
唐大之：“乔安娜，你怎么也抽起香烟来？”
乔安娜：“没事的，是玛格丽特给我吸的。”
玛格丽特：“咋啦，把我们当成女朋友啦？管理得还挺严格的呢。”
唐大之：“不是，与朋友应该没啥关系，只是烟气实在害处多。”
玛格丽特：“那你在赌场当发牌员，还不是天天被动吸烟？”
唐大之：“既然已经移民到美国，谁都须为五斗米折腰。”
玛格丽特：“你把情况说得太过严重了一点。”
唐大之：“几乎人人知道，除了烟雾缭绕，发牌工作不错。所以下班以后，我是绝对放飞，排斥任何烟味。”
10, Harmony pavilion, Day, Outside
Dazhi Tang：“Joanna，How have you also smoked a cigarette？”
Joanna：“Nothing，Margaret has given me a smoke.”
Margaret：“What is the matter？ Have you taken us as your girlfriend？ Your management is also very strict.”
Dazhi Tang：“Oh no，There should be no relationship with friends. Merely the smoke gas hurts too much certainly.”
Margaret：“Then you are a dealer in casino，Still being passive smoking day by day?”
Dazhi Tang：“Now that we have immigrated into the United States，Everyone must bow to peck and perch in objective realities.”
Margaret：“You are putting the case with speaking too seriously.”
Dazhi Tang：“Almost everyone knows, Except for smoky atmosphere, Dealer's work is good. So I am after work, Absolutely flying my mood, Rejecting any smoke gas.”
 
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（Screenplay）《America love story》

第五幕
Chapter Five

13，绿林大道，日，外
唐大之忍耐不住了：“你原来说笑时，嘴巴像朵花儿；飘来阵阵清香，撩拨心慌神乱；现在股股烟味，叫人生厌反感。”
乔安娜却支吾其词：“我是出于好奇，也才抽了几天；虽然是不太好，问题未必很大；因此可轻可重，为何意见尖锐？”
唐大之：“嘿，关系到你的健康！好，就算我多管闲事。”
乔安娜：“不，男子汉请宽容点！耶，小错误就放一马。”
唐大之：“大小姐，科学从来就是只会坚持正确的道理。”
言毕，突然出招，快马加鞭，双耳生风般地跑远了。
13, Greenwood avenue, Day, Outside
Dazhi Tang was unable to endure it further：“When you were chatting and laughing formerly, Your mouth looked like a flower; Gone with a intermittent fragrant wind to come over, Teasing and exciting other people palpitant mental confusion; Now being a unit of the smoke smell, Making people antipathetic.”
But Joanna spoke haltingly or ambiguously：“I was out of mere curiosity, Just having been smoking for a few days; Although it's not too good, The problem may not be very big; Therefore it can be light or heavy, why your opinion is so sharp ? ”
Dazhi Tang：“Hey，Being with relation to your health! Let it pass, Just drop the matter I put one's finger in another's pie.”
Joanna：“No, Man, please forgive, Yeah, little mistake, please loosen one yard.”
Dazhi Tang：“A big young lady, Science has always been will insist exactly right reason.”
Finished this conversation, Dazhi Tang suddenly took out the recipe, At top speed, aures unitas the wind sound on both ears ran off.
 
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（Screenplay）《America love story》

第六幕
Chapter Six

16，绿林大道，日，外
唐大之还是去买了食品，但回来时，神色非常严峻。
甚至，不肯再走过来，只停留在远处，招手表示意思。
俩人只好走过去。唐大之给了她们每人一小罐可口可乐。
另外，各自再拿到了一包万宝路牌的香烟。
乔安娜甚是恐慌：“什么意思？在你看来，糖类烟草，都很不好，为何要买，讽刺我们？”
唐大之满脸茫然：“我不知道。”
玛格丽特则自嘲：“有喝就喝，有抽就抽，得乐且乐，管他多甚，我的朋友，你说是吗？”
唐大之愠容出来：“我不知道。”
唐大之最终沉默下来，转过身就扬长而去了。
玛格丽特着急了：“唐大之，唐大之，你今天怎么没有说再见呢？”
唐大之义无反顾：“我不知道。”
16, Greenwood avenue, Day, Outside
Dazhi Tang still went to buy food, But when he returned, His expression was very severe.
Even, He refused to come over again, Only remaining in the distance, Beckoning in intention of meaning.
Both had to go over. Dazhi Tang gave them a small pot coca-cola each.
In addition, They got a pack of Marlboro cigarettes each again.
Joanna was very panic：“What do you mean? According to your opinion, Saccharide and tobacco are very all bad. Why have you wanted to buy? Have you satirised us?”
Dazhi Tang had a blank expression：“I don't know.”
But Margaret only was self-mocked：“ Having a drink only drink, Having a smoke only smoke, Having a joy only joy, Don't worry about a much of, My friend, Do you agree with me?”
Dazhi Tang was in the sulks：“I don't know.”
Dazhi Tang was silent in the end, Turned his steps, And just swaggered out.
Margaret worried about that：“Dazhi Tang, Dazhi Tang, Why do you do not say goodbye today?”
Dazhi Tang proceeded without hesitation：“I don't know.”
 
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（Screenplay）《America love story》

第七幕
Chapter Seven

19，绿林大道，傍晚，外
唐大之：“你太客气了，有话尽管说。”
乔安娜：“她抽烟少了，我已戒烟了。”
唐大之：“真得吗？大新闻。太好了！”
乔安娜：“是事实，我不敢，欺骗你。”
唐大之：“唉，根据经验，我很清楚。在生活中，谁肯听谁？所以你是，最好受众。就像璞玉，可以雕琢。因此，我真得感动极了。”
乔安娜：“那么你不生气了？那么我们和解了？那么又能练跑了？”
唐大之：“没有错，谢谢你，乔安娜。”
乔安娜：“谢谢你！唐大之，明天见。”
唐大之：“稍慢，我得送你一程。”
乔安娜：“你啊，始终滴水不漏。”
俩人击掌，并肩而行，很快地也就跑到了。
唐大之与玛格丽特笑着，击掌致意。
唐大之：“明天，这儿，时间，方式，不变，再见！”
19, Greenwood avenue, Nightfall, Outside
Dazhi Tang：“You are too polite. If you have some words, Not hesitate to speak.”
Joanna：“She has smoked less, I have already given up smoking.”
Dazhi Tang：“Really? The big news, Wonderful!”
Joanna：“It is a fact, I dare not cheat you.”
Dazhi Tang：“Gosh, According to the experience, I am very aware of the matter, In the life, Who will listen to who? So you are the best audience. Just like a diamond in the rough, Can be sculptured. Hence, I am extremely touched by what you told me.”
Joanna：“Then have you been not angry? Then have we compromised? Then will we be able to practise running again?”
Dazhi Tang：“Correct, Thank you, Joanna.”
Joanna：“Thank you, Dazhi Tang, See you tomorrow.”
Dazhi Tang：“Slightly slower, I have to give you a ride.”
Joanna：“Ah, You always are impermeable to leak out.”
The two high-fived, Lined side by side, Reached very quickly also.
Dazhi Tang and Margaret were laughing together, High-fived in sending their greetings.
Dazhi Tang：“Tomorrow, Here, Time, Mode, Unchanging, Goodbye!”
 
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