This is a new project I recently started. I do not like it a lot, I don't hate it though. this is the first four pages and I am not sure how to feel about it. Certain things i'm likely to remove later. I do plan on rewriting this later. This is not the final product, its not even the complete...
I have changed this scene around and I know my last Two versions were pretty bad. I'm hoping this time the scene is decent. I recently made edits and I spent a huge chunk of time not looking at this scene because of school. I was having some fun on the last couple of lines. I am using this scene...
Scene is still being reworked and is not finished. My Formatting needs to be fixed but I wanted to get this on a page, I apologize for the formatting. This is my first scene/screenplay and I am trying to improve my storytelling.