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    screenplay Any General critique

    Looking for general critiques
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    screenplay Is this something decent?

    This is a first draft. I am really looking for general critiques on it. Thank you very much!!
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    critique Working on something new, Is it worth continuing?

    This is a new project I recently started. I do not like it a lot, I don't hate it though. this is the first four pages and I am not sure how to feel about it. Certain things i'm likely to remove later. I do plan on rewriting this later. This is not the final product, its not even the complete...
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    screenplay Is my scene going well?

    I have changed this scene around and I know my last Two versions were pretty bad. I'm hoping this time the scene is decent. I recently made edits and I spent a huge chunk of time not looking at this scene because of school. I was having some fun on the last couple of lines. I am using this scene...
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    critique reworked a scene of mine, could i get an idea on its quality? 3 pages

    Scene is still being reworked and is not finished. My Formatting needs to be fixed but I wanted to get this on a page, I apologize for the formatting. This is my first scene/screenplay and I am trying to improve my storytelling.
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    critique Writing a scene, could i get a review on how it is so far? 3 pages

    I am new to screenwriting, this is my first project. Its a scene of a arguing couple.
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    I am new

    Hi, i am new to this site and to screen writing. I am looking for a place to show and get reviews on my work.
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