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  1. Constantin

    movies What's the last film you watched? And rate it!

    Those who are fans of pinball will enjoy it more ... As a light romantic comedy, it worked so well. Perfectly cast characters and a small indie film you probably never heard of.
  2. Constantin

    movies What's the last film you watched? And rate it!

    Pinball: The Man Who Saved the Game The best movie I have seen in a very long time. Incredibly well written. I actually clapped after watching this at home thru Amazon Prime membership :) On a hunt to find more from these same creators ...
  3. Constantin

    ChatGPT thread

    As good as the TV series was, the movie Fargo was just amazing. Cohen's best movie by far. Incidentally, talking about Chat GPT -- I asked ChatGPT about the Car Scene where the two kidnappers enter twin cities just before the kidnapping and Buscemi is talking-- I asked it what was the...
  4. Constantin

    Ask Us Anything About Screenwriting

    Thanks, I'll add this to my binge list. I am in season two of the Wire and it seems weaker than the first season
  5. Constantin

    Ask Us Anything About Screenwriting

    A friend of mine recently recommended "The Wire", a critically acclaimed series that played on HBO many years ago. While there's no denying the material feels authentic, I just couldn't see some of the characters doing the things they ending up doing near the end of season one. It was like the...
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    critique I wrote story premise but I don't know if it's worth developing need critiques. ~1700 word overview of a story

    You can get the free version of Celtx here ... https://celtx.informer.com/versions/
  7. Constantin

    misc Why is Hollywood Ditching Its Rule of "Show, Don't Tell"?

    Are you suggesting writers are adjusting their storytelling to accommodate viewer distraction?
  8. Constantin

    dialogue Thoughts on VO narration?

    Now try to imagine the same scene without the voice over ... It doesn't NEED Reds voice.. Franky the scene would have been more powerful if it were just the music playing There is a great link that discusses this very topic here...
  9. Constantin

    dialogue Thoughts on VO narration?

    Shawshank is my all-time favorite movie, but I am not sure it is because of the voice over. I would love to see a cut of this movie without voice over (similar to the final cut of blade runner). Not completely convinced Shawshank needed the voice over to be as well regarded as it is -- it's...
  10. Constantin

    treatment ChatGPT - A Screenplay Treatment Experiment

    I have no idea what you just said :)
  11. Constantin

    treatment ChatGPT - A Screenplay Treatment Experiment

    I have switched over to Rumble. There is some freedom from censorship there. YouTube is just horrible...
  12. Constantin

    treatment ChatGPT - A Screenplay Treatment Experiment

    Original thought? I would be happy if it was sensible enough to detect very basic contradiction (see my last post). That said, it's ability to convert an incredibly complex word salad into something intelligible is quite an achievement. The more I use this thing, however, the more I realize how...
  13. Constantin

    logline Logline Feedback - Any suggestions to improve it are welcome ...

    Actually, the idea is to get exposure through webtoons, with the hope it get some attention and possibly gets picked up as a movie. This happened with a few titles already https://www.webtoons.com/en/collection/adapted-for-the-screen/488
  14. Constantin

    logline Logline Feedback - Any suggestions to improve it are welcome ...

    Well, I am actually writing this as for my next Webcomic (Not quite on the same level as Lifetime network)... My artist is gonna kill me if i keep changing the title on him HAHAHA .. I asked him to use something similar to
  15. Constantin

    logline Logline Feedback - Any suggestions to improve it are welcome ...

    Blind Date, one of Bruce Willis' masterpieces hahah
  16. Constantin

    treatment ChatGPT - A Screenplay Treatment Experiment

    And then you get completely contradictions like this exchange, clearly, this AI is confused ... How in the world did the ai pass mba exam? https://www.nbcnews.com/tech/tech-news/chatgpt-passes-mba-exam-wharton-professor-rcna67036
  17. Constantin

    logline Logline Feedback - Any suggestions to improve it are welcome ...

    never heard of this movie, I'll have a look .. I liked Sean Penn in "State of Grace" great mob flick
  18. Constantin

    logline Logline Feedback - Any suggestions to improve it are welcome ...

    The problem is...there is a ruthlessness about the character that would need to be there, otherwise the doctor would not resort to such desperate measures. I am open to suggestions, however .. nothing is written in stone here, its all just a very rough scribble of notes and ideas
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    logline Logline Feedback - Any suggestions to improve it are welcome ...

    Yeah I struggled with that too, it was this or "Brothers Apart".. what do you mean "Lifetime" movie title?
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