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    Which is the best camera phone?

    Hi, Not certain if this question should be here or in gear. Can anyone tell me what mobile phone is great for making short films? I'm mainly a writer so not great on the technical side. My contracts coming up so I thought I would get phone to make films. Any suggestions?
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    Character Grid

    Thanks mate, I will take a look.
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    Character Grid

    Hi, does anyone use character grids/questions for character development? Do you recommend them? If so could you provide a link to a pdf I can download, cheers.:)
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    Account hack.

    The message came from indie talk forum, no link, just the information about the account hack. Just seemed very random.
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    Account hack.

    Hi, Just had a email saying that someone has tried to get into my account. (They failed)I have there I.P address, but I don't have a clue what to do with it. Any advice on what I should do?
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    short screenplay critique please

    Hi thanks for the feedback its greatly appreciated. I'm an adult student in my last year of a screen writing degree. I wrote it as I had to write a short that contained certain elements, I did get a upper first class for it so I was pretty pleased. One of the media production lectures has asked...
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    short screenplay critique please

    Hi, glad you enjoyed it, my grammar/spelling has never been good so thanks for the corrections. Thanks for taking the time to read my work, i appreciate your comments, cheers. :)
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    short screenplay critique please

    Thanks very much for the feedback it's greatly appreciated. I'm glad you enjoyed it!:) If anyone's interested I have another but this is more of a character arc. http://www.mediafire.com/view/vhgkbstf6bkwyvo/Bad%20News.pdf
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    short screenplay critique please

    Hi everyone, Can you please give me some constructive criticism on my short screenplay, even if you only read the first page! cheers http://www.mediafire.com/view/mvzgz3hhtj6606g/This%20is%20Love%20print%20out%20and%20hand%20in.pdf
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    short silent script, thoughts please.

    Here is a short script that i have written, it is a silent short. i am trying to show rather than tell. A silent script seemed the best way to learn this. let me know what you think thanks. http://www.mediafire.com/view/vhgkbstf6bkwyvo/Bad%20News.pdf
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    Camera angles/movement to emphasise mental imbalance in character.

    Hi thanks for the reply, I will be subtley placing "three" around the room, there are shelves with spices and cups on, they will be all grouped in threes. He will be cutting vegatables into three etc. The end will bethe dinner table with three places but only the character sitting there. His...
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    Camera angles/movement to emphasise mental imbalance in character.

    Great advice thanks. Yea the story will start out normal but we will slowly see the characters mental state change due to his actions. The final bang being the audience finding out his family is dead due to the actions his OCD make him make.
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    Camera angles/movement to emphasise mental imbalance in character.

    Hi everyone thanks for the tips. I enjoy learning new things, I just wanted to know what tricks people use in my situation. I think at least if I have the knowledge it will spark my own creativity rather than copying someone else's. The scene itself will consist of a character sitting at a...
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    Camera angles/movement to emphasise mental imbalance in character.

    Hi, I'm trying to find ways to create the feeling of psychological uneasiness or tension in the subject being filmed. I have heard of the Dutch angle are there any other methods to do this. Thanks.
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    Dialouge

    Enter the scene at the last possible moment and leave the scene at the earliest possible moment.
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    Feedback on script

    Nice little script, I would remove the line "there's your money, now let her go" you show this by throwing the bag. I would also remove "Hold it. You must think you’re pretty smart huh? That’s a shame because now we are gonna have to kill you." I would have the mask man flick through the money...
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    Can you recommend a DSLR for under £1000/$1500

    Thanks for all your time and the advice it is greatly appreciated, I think the 5d markII would be perfect but I have really been stung before with second hand electricals. (Dodgy laptop). I think it may be best to perhaps go and try all the recommended cameras, to see how they feel. Thanks you...
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    Can you recommend a DSLR for under £1000/$1500

    The t3i looks great and it would leave more cash for the glass. I was looking to get the largest sensor as possible to help with low light shooting. I'm just learning about DSLR's so haven't read up much on the glass just yet. Would I be better(in the long run) getting a zoom or a prime lense...
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