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I agree with Escher... No offense, but perhaps you could take a class on scriptwriting? It could be worse but it's plagued with all those things Escher pointed out. I couldn't stand your punctuation, it read like something I wrote when I was thirteen. Is English your first language?

I've changed the story quite a bit and I'll give you an update as soon as I can. But I must say that it's pretty self explanatory why Adrian is a scientist and why he has went looking for big cats. He's a conservationist with a background in biology. He cares for the declining population of rare...

I agree. As an atheist I can tell you I certainly don't base my life off the fact that I'm an atheist. That's just absurd. There has to be another quality or trait that makes this protagonist interesting...

Honestly, whatever this is sounds like you wrote it in five minutes. Tell us more about your story and why it is unique. It's as simple as that.

I want to know how exactly a universe can take place in which there is both an ancient Goddess of creation and a race of sentient artificially intelligent machines. Usually belief in a benevolent creator stops when a civilization's science is so advanced it no longer feels the need to conjure up...

Here is an image of my characters' likenesses. I've updated my script outline with your help and I'll keep you updated whenever I reach what I consider to be a great enough milestone. Thanks. http://i.imgur.com/aYf8JQb.png

Thank you, FantasySciFi and Tibet, you've both given me really great input. I'll have to mull over these points before I get down to writing.

Thanks for the input, Matt. I'm glad to hear you think it sounds alright so far. I've been outlining my short stories for years now and it really helps. I can't just write off the top of my head. I'm a planner.

[Panthera Tigris] screenplay idea. Thoughts and advice? * Panthera Tigris is a placeholder name. If you've read my introductory post, you'll know I've been writing for five years, but never for a visual medium. I have experience with Celtx and understand the terminology. Here is my idea for my...

Hello, everyone, my name's Taylor. I've been writing for about five years, but never for a visual medium. I think writing for TV/Film suits me better. My only experience of scriptwriting was when I studied media at college a couple of years ago. (I used Celtx in class, produced and edited my...