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Beautiful!

Any more criticism will be appreciated especially from mandarin speakers.

Thank you very much. I'm glad that you enjoyed it :)

Hello fellow Filmmakers I hope everyone is having a great time. One of my dreams when I started making short films was to be able to create an Asian-inspired short. My passion for Asian films started at a young age when my father use to bring VHS movies home from the flea market. Throughout the...

Yeah the ending got mixed reviews in my showing in class, some liked it, some didn't. However, I appreciate your genuine feedback!

Thanks for taking a look at my short! I agree it doesn't look like a typical stop motion film. That's because I sped it up in post so that it will be less than a minute. My professor didn't want it over a minute lol.

Hello Everyone! Thank you for allowing me to post my work. This was a very short film that we had to shoot during class hours (2hrs) on campus. The assignment was to only use still images to tell a story. This is normally not my type of style so any constructive criticism is appreciated...

The bathroom scene was actually: Kool-Aid Drink Mix Powder Cherry Flavor 19 oz. $5 On the bathroom walls and on Taylor we used fake blood that you can buy from Party City. http://www.partycity.com/product/gallon+of+blood.do I actually bought the smaller version for about $7.

Thanks! To be honest, I initially wanted it to be continuous, but I couldn't figure out how to transition from the dancing to the last shot. Therefore, I decided to edit it this way. Thank God, because I think this way is much better and interesting.

Thank you for your honest feedback! I agree on the points you brought up. I need to make sure that next time I tighten up the pacing and dialogue.

No problem. I look forward to your next version. Good luck!

Agree

I will recommend reducing the saturation. I understand you're going for a "dreamy" feel, but it's a bit too much. Interesting concept though.

The ending of this video is fine. Sound will certainly make it more engaging.

I don't think sound will help. I was expecting the protagonist to appear but he doesn't. 0:18 feels like an establishing shot, something you would put in the start of the film, not in the middle of a chase scene. It takes me out of it for a second. However, I don't think that shot would work...

I'm interested, but it's hard to figure out the plot from the trailer. However, the shots from the trailer looks great.

Hey, I like the idea. However, a couple of nitpicks. The title logo is a bit hard to read. I would make it a bit clearer. Maybe separate the letters slightly away from each other. When I first saw it, I felt it was too quick, but after seeing it again I think it would be fine if you removed...

Hello Everyone! I'm new to the forums and I want to thank the creators for making an area where storytellers can share their imagination. This was my final assignment for my Motion Picture 1 course. The requirements was to develop a piece that had at least 1 night and day shot for both...