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    Short film - Sheol (looking for some helpful narrative feedback, tips and even ideas)

    1. INT. CHRISTIAN’S DREAM. NIGHT 1 CHRISTIAN (Mid 20s, un-groomed hair) and NATALIE (thin petite woman, early 20s) are seen naked lying side by side under white covers that seem endless like the ocean. CHRISTIAN Mansell (V/O) I recall as a child my family had a guard dog. At night he would...
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    Sheol - Short film (narrative advice please)

    1. INT. CHRISTIAN’S DREAM. NIGHT 1 CHRISTIAN (Mid 20s, un-groomed hair) and NATALIE (thin petite woman, early 20s) are seen naked lying side by side under white covers that seem endless like the ocean. CHRISTIAN Mansell (V/O) I recall as a child my family had a guard...
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    watch Incineration of the Drowing Soul - Short Film

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6_83IXTdv64&hd=1 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6_83IXTdv64&hd=1 Short film for project at Curtin University, feedback would be great :)
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    watch Short film Recollection (youtube video)

    media short film for year 12 exams - please give feedback for improvements before we submit the film into the Curriculum council The link is https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=78XZMw8_8jY
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    watch Short film script feedback and advice

    Scene 1:streets David (17) is walking in a fast pace as he sees a man following him, he quickly walks into an office slamming the door behind him. (camera looks upwards at the office sign indicating its a therapist's office). Scene 2: Therapist office Dr. Jones Can you remember anything...
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    watch Short film feedback please

    Scene 1:streets David (17) is walking in a fast pace as he sees a man following him, he quickly walks into an office slamming the door behind him. (camera looks upwards at the office sign indicating its a therapist's office). Scene 2: Therapist office Dr. Jones Can you remember anything...
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    watch Feedback on draft short film - Recollection

    Recollection: Scene 1: Flashback Car accident – night (Two guys unconscious in a damaged car that had collided into a street light) Therapist Narrating: You were in a car crash, your brother died, but you survived with severe fractions to your skull, resulting in your memory loss. Can you...
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    watch Need advice and feedback on short film narrative and twist

    So far my narrative revolves around a 19 year old called David, who recently lost his memory in a car accident and is talking to a therapist to help gain his recollection of his past and identify himself. David tells the therapist about a recurring dream that his been having, where his seen...
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