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    No offense taken! Thanks for the compliments and, more importantly, thanks for your criticisms. As I said before, I am not entirely happy with how the bird turned out. It was my first foray into stop motion animation and I obviously have a lot of room to improve (if I ever decided to go back...
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    What'd you guys think of the music, by the way? I'm a University of Kansas alumn (Jayhawk) and if any of you are familiar with "Rock Chalk Jayhawk" you might hear it in the scene in which she runs from the bird.
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    Yeah, I've been thinking of removing the bird. I think I'll keep it in. I'm not trying to sell the project or anything, it was just done for fun. And I'm not always a fan of "the monster you don't see." I usually respect something like "The Giant Claw" (to keep with the bird analogy) than Blair...
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    I had a clay sculpture made of the head and the feet. Within the clay sculpture we had a metal wireframe. We then took a series of still pictures of the model in which we would gradually move the model. We shot that in front of a greenscreen and the used the woods as a back plate. The shot of...
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    Haha, I like that comment, "Story wise it was solid, unless you give it any thought." That's just critical review gold. Yeah, I was definitely treating it more allegorically rather than as a literal happening. Because if this really happened, then grandpa was a dick. She took the egg as a...
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    Hey to TheKoreandonut I saw your trailer (you said you wanted feedback on your film, but all I could find was a trailer) I thought there was some promising looking footage (what camera did you use?) but I didn't get any idea of what the story was from the trailer. That's not necessarily a bad...
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    That reminds me of another film I worked on. I provided the sound effects, mixing and all the musical arrangments in this one: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kjGEllgRiAs&feature=player_embedded
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    I'll have to check that out. What about my film reminded you of it? Was it the photography/music/acting/story? Thanks for the compliment :) No worries, and I hope I didn't sound to snippy with my response earlier. Didn't intend that, but reading it now I feel as if I sounded that way. Thanks...
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    You'll have to input the password I included above
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    Hey guys, I recently directed a short film, and I would like to get feedback on it if you would be so kind http://vimeo.com/25950605 (password: birdyip) You'll have to input the password above to see the film. Any and all feedback would be most welcome
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    Lifetime Guarentee, My newest short film (check it out!) I recently wrote, directed and did sound design for a short film. Let me know what you think: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l3qXDE2VgtU
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    Check out my new short film sorry, wrong thread...
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    Actually the out of focus shot was something of a failed joke. Notice the difference sound on that shot than on the other cut ins. It's supposed to be a parody of that idea of cutting in when something dramatic happens (that same idea is used earlier in the film) it's supposed to draw attention...
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    Hey thanks for the feedback you guys. What did your post say before you changed it, Cinemaguerrila? I seem to have missed it.
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    Yeah, that was the whole crux of the picture... the AIDS part. Hey Larry, I see it says you're an editor. What'd you think of the editing in the movie?
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    I use Cakewalk Sonar Producer 8, with Kontakt 2 and East West Symphonic Orchestra for most of my compositions. For this one I actually used Logic and recorded all of my own samples (using trash and found objects, because of the nature of the film-i.e. it's about a hobo) using a condenser...
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    And no... I'm actually not very familiar with Stockhausen...
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    Hey thanks for the feedback guys! I was actually quite happy with both actors' performances, though I can see how one could see the main characters performance as too over the top. It's funny that you should mention Planet of the Apes, as I count Goldsmith as one of my biggest influences in my...
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    Hey there, I'm new to these parts, so I figured I'd start off by showing some of my work. I'm a college student studying music composition, but my main field of interest is in film music. I also dabble in directing short films. Here's my most recent film, I'd appreciate any feedback, so let me...
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