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Hey guys, I created this little re-visioning of the scene in American Psycho where Bateman approaches the homeless man in the alleyway.
Louis Hunter from the Secret Circle (http://www.fox8.tv/shows/secret-circle/cast/louis-hunter) plays Pat Bateman
Laurent Boiteux plays the Homeless man
Hope...
I decided to finally upload the trailer for the first short film I did last year.
http://vimeo.com/26750002
Not many people have seen it because I was... slighly embarrased for some reason to show people, but anyways, the teaser is up for anyone to view.
Let me know your thoughts :)
I was actually considering that at one point, but in the end I decided that since I was making it at college then I would aim it at students starting out in the courses to get a quick overview so they had a fair understanding before their teaches delved into the course.
Glad you liked it :)...
Hey guys, I made this doco/instructional piece while I was a student 2 years ago.
There's a bit of the narration that I believe is wrong about blowing air into the gate and blowing the light meter away, that's one bit I have to go back and fix up... I think it's wrong, anyways.
I was making...
As mentioned, the dialogue should have had some extended fading because it sounds like cutting off all of a sudden which is far too obvious. I'm sure you could've masked it better.
A bit of color grading could've been beneficial too.
Good stuff.
That Jason character was a terrible actor! I was cringing everytime he opened his mouth.
I also thought the Mark character was very bad too. The whole performance felt amateurish but it wasn't as bad as Jason's acting.
I felt the dialogue was very badly written too, I didn't feel like some of...
So it was a short to promote your website?
Great approach to promotion, i have to say however the approach is the only part you do well here. I liked some of the technical parts but the minor continuity issue at 15 seconds doesn't do well for the image.
Am I just being too pedantic? Yeah...
What happened to the aspect ratio at 0:49 ??
Was it an artistic choice to have the flashbacks as a different aspect ratio? The question is, why?
My main complaints are about the technical aspects especially continuity (girl looks left to right, then guy looks left to right...hmmm), shots...
I posted my 2nd one, not this. I guess they were in the vimeo listings and some people saw it. :)
I thought I'd post it here just for the people that may have missed it :)
I probably shouldn't post up my first short film that I made as a student because embarrassment might ensue, but here goes.
I made this in 2009 using a Panasonic P2 camera
I used the experience to make my 2nd short film 'Purgatory' which was already posted up, so it's a good comparison between...