Search results

Hello, I spent some time revisiting a story I shelved called Roshambo, but I decided to take the ideas I had so far, and share them with an AI collaborator. I was curious just how far advanced this technology was in weaving a compelling narrative using only the ideas and concepts I fed it...

I have spent my morning playing around with ChatGPT and I have been struck with important discoveries. It is remarkably capable of understanding concepts, even those that are abstract and highly nuanced. It does not do such a good job of taking those concepts and weaving an engrossing story...

Who needs ChatGPT when you have mlesemann. This is a wonderful improvement. I will use this :) Thanks so much.

I was intrigued and signed up to ChatGPT. Wow, this thing is scary. You're right about some of its limitations, though -- it cannot create a long screenplay and definitely jumps around your story ideas, but for small beats and select scenes, it does a pretty good job. Perhaps it is my fault as I...

they are similar but yours, I mean ChatGPT's is better. Damn, that thing is gonna put a lot of screenwriters out of work .. lol

Twin Fate Separated at birth, twin brothers from vastly different worlds escape their oppressive upbringing and, by fate, reunite on the streets of New York. Together, they embark on a perilous journey to find their birth mother while evading those from their troubled past who threaten to tear...

A new documentary will be released this month detailing the absolutely horrific truth of what I was eluding to two years ago. The vaccine rollouts over the last eighteen months have resulted in death and injury to many unsuspecting victims of the jab. One of the strangest phenomenon is the...

In a short story I wrote called "LENDER OF LAST RESORT" I employed Chekov's Gun using the title of the story itself and a billboard atop a travel agency, as a funny play on words which comes together at the end :) ... Essentially its a comedy about an elderly man who runs a vegetable stand in a...

That makes sense, in fact, I just found this on reddit that confirms exactly what you are saying. So this was my problem... The camera has indeed moved so it warrants a new slug line :) Thank you!!

so you would have one slugline for one side of the bar and a separate slugline for the other side of the bar?

Here is part of the storyboard of the scene... As you can see, its the same location ... just on different ends of the bar ...

This is the prior part of the scene for some context. So essentially Kayode is watching his friend's effort to pick up the girl from afar,

Yeah, Kayode is watching from the distance, but the camera is closer to him but only for the last shot. The camera is closer to Adebayo and Morayo in the prior parts of the scene

Hi there, I have a question about slug lines within a particular scene... Suppose we have two friends sitting on one end of a bar and they are looking across at a young woman, sitting alone on the other side of the bar. She is sufficiently distant that the men cannot hear anything from her...

Hey, at least you figured it out! Sometimes scripts can be shelved for a long time and then the stars align and you are ready to dust it off and work on it again.

Nice, is this using Unreal engine?

As adaptations go, this was well done; much better than the others screenplays from the same series of books. The gore was kept to a minimum and the script was pretty tight. As for the book being better than the screenplay, that tends to be the case as it is hard to cram all the good stuff from...

Yeah, he was no Ted Kaczynski. But I would imagine for those that don't get caught, they have to be pretty damn smart to elude capture. The cops, generally speaking, were not that smart in the Silence of the Lambs, especially those two guards that get killed by Hannibal Lecter in his escape...

Horror movie characters usually have this flaw. How many times do we see victim after victim die the most ridiculous ways just to add tension. One that really comes to mind is Silence of the Lambs and the basement scene. Here we have this brilliant FBI agent and by rights, she should be dead by...