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Just watched it... While I did like it, I think I liked what this could have been. Just didn't seem quite tight enough. Ran long in a few spots but still... It was fun to watch and I take my hat off to you for getting it done!

Watch him play Louie the loan shark in PHOENIX. He steals every scene he's in.

You wrote: But the main story of my movie is about a 27 year old male American by the name of Duncan. Duncan is struggling to buy a home where he can live. Due to a coincidence, he then met a stranger who offered him a large beautiful mansion for a cheap price. The mansion is also still in good...

My family drinks a hell of a lot of water... More than most and I went down this rabbit hole myself a few years ago. I won't get into the discussion of cancer and all that but I do find some relief knowing that we're filtering out as much as possible. In fact, there are quite a bit PFAS in a lot...

So I had to read through this a few times in order to understand it. If I'm correct, you're showing an old man who's lost his wife after many years of marriage. I wouldn't say this is garbage as much as I'd say it's HARD TO UNDERSTAND. In the beginning of the script, are these flashbacks the...

Don't let it PUZZLE you. LOL. I've looked at a hell of a lot (hundreds) of newbieISH wannabe screenwriters' screenplays over the years and nobody has ever once not overwritten. I'm more than willing to concede that you don't overwrite... As long as you do not. I'm willing to bet that you do...

The Screenwriter's Bible is a good book when it comes to formatting but it really isn't going to help you know, understand, and develop your craft if this in fact what you intend to do. Your best bet is to read as many screenplays as you can find. Unfortunately, most of what exists online are...

Unfortunately, it sounds like you don't have ENOUGH story and if I had to guess? This sounds like it's one of, if not your first screenplay so that further tells me that it's probably overwritten which means in reality? It's probably even shorter than you think. If you're trying to become a...

I am by no means an expert... Really nothing more than an armchair fan or enthusiast although I have read quite extensively about the subject. From everything I've been able to gather in my rather miniscule lifespan... Experts [sic] seem to think that saucers have actually EVOLVED from...

This is the closest picture I could find that looks like the one I saw hovering over the water... The lights around the middle of the craft are very similar but the craft I saw also had lights on the smaller, round section above the middle but this was the correct shape. All the UFOs myself and...

I think threads like these are fun so let me jump in here... I'm from Northern California and not only have I seen a UFO in my own back yard (so to speak) but my brother and I saw a Bigfoot too. I come from a tiny town of less than 20 people called Strawberry Valley and a couple of miles behind...

You wrote: INT. BOYE FAMILY HOUSEHOLD - SITTING ROOM - DAY - FLASHBACK YAW (20), panicked, enters backwards -- trips over his feet and falls to the carpet. Yaw looks up at the MASKED MAN (20s), he wears a black tracksuit. His face hidden by a balaclava. The Masked Man stops. Yaw glances...

And? That's WHY the generation of TODAY want to be on reality TV, social influencers, YouTubers, etc. LOL. *NOTE: I appreciate the kind words... I really do. It can be difficult to KEEP IT TOGETHER. LOL.

I hear ya... I really do. My mother and father were ex-cons. My dad did 9 years in Vacaville and San Quentin -- my mother -- a little over two years in Tehachapi. I only mention this to make note that I didn't grow up like most if not all the friends I had in school. I would be invited to their...

I don't mind facetious replies at all... It's all good as long as we're not getting personal which is why I keep coming back to all us "regulars." LOL. Having said that... I never meant to imply that a serial killer is like the rest of us or even sane... Quite the opposite. THEY'RE INSANE...

That's where I'll have to agree to disagree... There are plenty of intelligent and even cultured serial killers. They just haven't been caught. Plenty of people are killed every year by a serial killer but local and federal law enforcement just aren't up to the task (I'm putting that nicely) of...

There's really no difference in formatting when it comes to shooting scripts vs. spec scripts or original adaptation of scripts from a book or some other material. It's what you LEAVE OUT when you write the original. The original is written to be READ, plain and simple. I know a lot of members...

I have the race kit in mine with an aftermarket pipe and filter... After a few months, about the best I could ever get out of it was just under 140. Probably 138 but there is definitely no power left to pop a wheelie at 138 but by GOD... It really does own the corners ONCE you actually LEARN how...

I ride one of the last Buell XB12R Firebolts made right before they extended the swingarm which I should add... Screwed that line of bike up in my humble opinion. I can't help but ride American... LOL. But I did have a chance to ride an MV Agusta F4CC and was VERY IMPRESSED.

I should EXPAND on that... Go to any Northern California ahem... Liberal get together and they do the same thing.