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Thanks. Anyone else?

Hey guys, currently working on a comedy script, it's very early stages so please ignore any formatting, misplacements or character descriptions that are missing, i'll be sorting all that asap. Really want some opinions on the characters, flow and the dialogue on the opening 13 pages, what I have...

FSF, don't be silly I was completely expecting comments of the like, so appreciative that you've even taken some of your time to read and offer your opinions on it! I will definitely take what you've said on board. Maz - This is actually my first ever screenplay, purely written to just get...

And thanks for the welcome!

Yeah haha i'm a brit so that could explain that. I have a couple of other ideas ready to begin work on, so do you think it best to abandon this one now, or is it more my writing style and formatting that need work in terms if this particular one?

Thanks for taking the time to read it buddy! I'm extremely amateur as you can tell so just looking to adapt how to write a screenplay that is actually decent right now. Really appreciate the comments will work on that!

Hey guys, i'm new here so sorry if I'm not following appropriate customs. Was just hoping that somebody could give me some feedback on my comedy tv script? It's not a final polish so just really looking for any comments on like the first 5-10 pages, and specifically the dialogue. Extremely...