Here is my new screenplay, please if there is anything that you notice wrong please let me know... Thanks guys!
AARON BLACK (V.O.)
America is a stable country filled with very unstable people. So, how do we fix this problem?... You go after the unstable people, thing is, that’s easier said...
Wow! Amazing! It's very clear that you two poured your heart and soul into this film, and that is another thing that will make this film excellent! I hope you all go far, I mean- whyshouldn't you if you're going to be filmmaking like this! Good luck to you all!