Thanks for the feedback!
* I mean she wears contemporary clothes but acts like a traditional housewife.
* I'll make those changes about fixing up actions as parentheticals.
* I'm planning to direct this script so I was planning on messing around with the lights in the room to signify the eerie...
The logline is: A young woman tries to find out what's going on as a eerie presence looms over the household.
We Don't Talk about Eddie script
Any feedback is greatly appreciated!
Edit: Updated Version